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Array ( [sid] => 26793 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Want this to be Right – I Want You to be Ready [time] => 2003-11-09 21:09:03 [hometext] => I've wanted you for so long, now I just want you to be sure your ready for this [bodytext] => I’m so afraid I will make the wrong choice,
I’ve waited for this day to come
for what seems like forever.

I thought I always knew what I would say
if I ever got to have a relationship with you.

Now I’m scared
I want to know for sure
you really want me
I’ve seen you with other girls
seen how you’ve loved them
cared for them
I want the same thing

I want to be able
to be for sure
you see me
the real me
the person you’ve thought you’ve wanted to be with
I don’t want to have a regular relationship
I want this to be like nothing else I’ve ever experienced

I want to cry half the time
because I don’t know
if you know
how strongly I feel
I’m scared
I’m scared out of my wits

Do you know
What you mean to me?
I’ve cared for so long
Yet I don’t want us to be a mistake

What is going to be best for us?
Can you see
Me
A self conscience, slightly insecure girl
I appear happy most of the time
I’m very deep in thought
Though my words don’t always show it

I’ve loved you for so long
And now that I have even the slightest chance with you
I want us to be complete
I desire there to be a connection
Not a dreamed up one
A real one

I don’t want to rush us
I want you to be sure
That I’m not a rebound
That we aren’t using each other
That you really care
I want you to know what this relationship would truly be

Are you emotionally ready again?
To take a step into a relationship
Are you healed enough from the past relationship
To move on?
Not because you know you need to
But because you are ready

Because even though I’ve waited
I can still wait
Though I talk of urgency
I will wait, if that’s what it will take before you are ready
Because I really do love you
And I want you
Not what is left from past relationships

I don’t mean to sound selfish
If I do I apologize
I just want you to know for yourself
How you really truly feel
If time is still needed
Just say the word
I’ll be here
Waiting
For you
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 413 [topic] => 48 [informant] => BrghtNSnshny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
I Want this to be Right – I Want You to be Ready

Contributed by BrghtNSnshny on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 09:09:03 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I’m so afraid I will make the wrong choice,
I’ve waited for this day to come
for what seems like forever.

I thought I always knew what I would say
if I ever got to have a relationship with you.

Now I’m scared
I want to know for sure
you really want me
I’ve seen you with other girls
seen how you’ve loved them
cared for them
I want the same thing

I want to be able
to be for sure
you see me
the real me
the person you’ve thought you’ve wanted to be with
I don’t want to have a regular relationship
I want this to be like nothing else I’ve ever experienced

I want to cry half the time
because I don’t know
if you know
how strongly I feel
I’m scared
I’m scared out of my wits

Do you know
What you mean to me?
I’ve cared for so long
Yet I don’t want us to be a mistake

What is going to be best for us?
Can you see
Me
A self conscience, slightly insecure girl
I appear happy most of the time
I’m very deep in thought
Though my words don’t always show it

I’ve loved you for so long
And now that I have even the slightest chance with you
I want us to be complete
I desire there to be a connection
Not a dreamed up one
A real one

I don’t want to rush us
I want you to be sure
That I’m not a rebound
That we aren’t using each other
That you really care
I want you to know what this relationship would truly be

Are you emotionally ready again?
To take a step into a relationship
Are you healed enough from the past relationship
To move on?
Not because you know you need to
But because you are ready

Because even though I’ve waited
I can still wait
Though I talk of urgency
I will wait, if that’s what it will take before you are ready
Because I really do love you
And I want you
Not what is left from past relationships

I don’t mean to sound selfish
If I do I apologize
I just want you to know for yourself
How you really truly feel
If time is still needed
Just say the word
I’ll be here
Waiting
For you




Copyright © BrghtNSnshny ... [ 2003-11-09 21:09:03]
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Re: I Want this to be Right – I Want You to be Ready (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 09:38:18 PM AEST
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hey* i liked your poem* eventhought it was a tad on the long side* but it was still good* keep writing* HOLLA*

**Missy**


Re: I Want this to be Right – I Want You to be Ready (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 11:00:26 PM AEST
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I liked the write and this shows a lot of caring and patience. I hope it all works out for you.


Re: I Want this to be Right – I Want You to be Ready (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 04:50:09 AM AEST
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I hope the other paryty understands what it feels like to have and understand the terms hope and patience in this context>>> Good luck. Great Read!!!

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