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Array ( [sid] => 26901 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She Bleeds [time] => 2003-11-11 21:59:41 [hometext] => Written for a story of mine. Relates to my other poem ''Dark Dreams,'' but is from a different perspective... is also further along in the story. [bodytext] => Her open cuts begin to bleed
She falls upon her pale knees
The feathers drip, the feathers fall
Is she an angel after all?

And you have seen her soaring
On a pair of broken wings
You've never seen her bleeding
Though you know she's cut so deep

Her crystal tears begin to flow
Her love and sorrow grows and grows
The blood that drips, the blood that falls
Is she an angel after all?

Oh curses to the devil
That could cause her so much pain!
Oh woe upon the devil
Who would hurt her in this way!

Now in her heart she knows what's true
What once was gold shines icy blue
The words that drip, the words that fall
Is she from heaven after all?

And all that I can give her
Is a shoulder where it's safe
And even though I love her
She will never feel the same

Rising from the ground she sighs
And wipes the teardrops from her eyes
"So now I trip, and now I fall
But now I'll stand and face your call."

Standing by the window
He turns around and sighs
And I know he is as heartless
As the day he left her side

"Lucifer, you've changed too much
There's something different in your touch
The tears must drip, the tears must fall
Do you believe me after all?

I thought that you still loved me
But it seems that I was wrong
It's time that I stopped crying
It's time that I moved on

And now I think I've changed my mind
So after all that I can find
My tears will fill an empty pail
But in the end, I will prevail."

Through all of this he calmly takes
A cold, impassive, heartless face
And all the courage she has shown
Has only left her out alone

Now all that I can give her
Is a shoulder where it's safe
And even though I love her
She will never trust again. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Cora-Windover [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
She Bleeds

Contributed by Cora-Windover on Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 09:59:41 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Her open cuts begin to bleed
She falls upon her pale knees
The feathers drip, the feathers fall
Is she an angel after all?

And you have seen her soaring
On a pair of broken wings
You've never seen her bleeding
Though you know she's cut so deep

Her crystal tears begin to flow
Her love and sorrow grows and grows
The blood that drips, the blood that falls
Is she an angel after all?

Oh curses to the devil
That could cause her so much pain!
Oh woe upon the devil
Who would hurt her in this way!

Now in her heart she knows what's true
What once was gold shines icy blue
The words that drip, the words that fall
Is she from heaven after all?

And all that I can give her
Is a shoulder where it's safe
And even though I love her
She will never feel the same

Rising from the ground she sighs
And wipes the teardrops from her eyes
"So now I trip, and now I fall
But now I'll stand and face your call."

Standing by the window
He turns around and sighs
And I know he is as heartless
As the day he left her side

"Lucifer, you've changed too much
There's something different in your touch
The tears must drip, the tears must fall
Do you believe me after all?

I thought that you still loved me
But it seems that I was wrong
It's time that I stopped crying
It's time that I moved on

And now I think I've changed my mind
So after all that I can find
My tears will fill an empty pail
But in the end, I will prevail."

Through all of this he calmly takes
A cold, impassive, heartless face
And all the courage she has shown
Has only left her out alone

Now all that I can give her
Is a shoulder where it's safe
And even though I love her
She will never trust again.




Copyright © Cora-Windover ... [ 2003-11-11 21:59:41]
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Re: She Bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 10:10:18 PM AEST
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if the poem is any indication i'd love to read the story a great read


Re: She Bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 11:12:50 PM AEST
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wow this is a beautiful poem... I really liked it great write and so touching

Peace
JENNA


Re: She Bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by texasw97 on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 01:09:14 AM AEST
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Whoa..I like...


Re: She Bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 05:52:07 AM AEST
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Oh my god.. what a beautiful poem.. i can relate a lot to this.. this is just amazing.. wow..
x_x_x




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