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Afraid to let you see what's really inside.
All these emotions bottled away,
Inside I'm afraid they will forever stay.
You say tell me, I'm here to help,
But you're the reason these feelings are felt.
So how can I say what's really in my heart,
When I know in the end, it will tear you apart. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Puffer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Untold Thoughts

Contributed by Puffer on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 01:30:03 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Wanting to tell you everything I hide,
Afraid to let you see what's really inside.
All these emotions bottled away,
Inside I'm afraid they will forever stay.
You say tell me, I'm here to help,
But you're the reason these feelings are felt.
So how can I say what's really in my heart,
When I know in the end, it will tear you apart.

Copyright © Puffer ... [ 2003-11-13 13:30:03]
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Re: Untold Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 02:07:29 PM AEST
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great write for a short one

I enjoyed reading this

peace

JENNA

Re: Untold Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 04:22:43 PM AEST
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A fine write
Well done

Re: Untold Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 07:05:43 AM AEST
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Dear Puffer my dear,
Your parents, are tough, have no fear.
What you say to them, may hurt, but it hurts you more to keep it inside and let it tear,
the relationship you should have with your
Mom and Dad.
Your poem is so heartwrenching, and filled with fear....I can remember when I was scared too...but you're going to be surprized if you do.....tell them a thing or two..It is going to make you feel the fool, I'll bet. They are parents.....and they will forgive and forget!
lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: Untold Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 10:31:32 PM AEST
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Damn This is really good

Re: Untold Thoughts (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:46:03 PM AEST
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Your poems get better each time! I can totally relate!! Good going.
-Esther

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