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Array ( [sid] => 27168 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Trouble [time] => 2003-11-15 14:20:19 [hometext] => I wrote this when I was in a bad time in my life. [bodytext] => Give me a hand, get me outta this hole
I don't wanna completely lose control

Staggering and stumbling across the vast
Fate seems to have left me surpassed

Don't leave me here, alone with my thoughts,
A venture overlooked by the Argonauts!

Do you think I can survive alone in this world
With my sanity still left to be unfurled?

No one will come, no one will aid...
My mind will slowly put up its mental barricade

Leave me be, solely with my trouble [comments] => 3 [counter] => 272 [topic] => 48 [informant] => RealmX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

My Trouble

Contributed by RealmX on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:20:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Give me a hand, get me outta this hole
I don't wanna completely lose control

Staggering and stumbling across the vast
Fate seems to have left me surpassed

Don't leave me here, alone with my thoughts,
A venture overlooked by the Argonauts!

Do you think I can survive alone in this world
With my sanity still left to be unfurled?

No one will come, no one will aid...
My mind will slowly put up its mental barricade

Leave me be, solely with my trouble

Copyright © RealmX ... [ 2003-11-15 14:20:19]
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Re: My Trouble (User Rating: 1 )
by zaowhvn on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:27:13 PM AEST
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great work. relateable. doesnt writing this help alot? it does for me

Re: My Trouble (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:47:45 PM AEST
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I like this poem.

~Brittany~

Re: My Trouble (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:18:45 PM AEST
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Is it that you need someone to help you but you also don't want anyone to help you...or you just can't reach out to anyone? If so I can definately relate. I hope that this trouble that you write about here has passed and you have grown and learned from it...a good write and hope that writing it did help even if just a bit.

Emma.

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