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Array ( [sid] => 27176 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Little Miss Orchid [time] => 2003-11-15 16:25:59 [hometext] => Something that I wrote about a very special lady.. a very special friend... Ellyne.. forever my Little Miss Orchid. A memory of lost sentiments long swallowed by the mists of time. [bodytext] => Like a dream
upon a dark slumber
Like a breeze
upon a hot summer

You bring to me
a spark of fire
To light my heart's
dying ember

Like a song
of sweet harmony
Like a picture
of infinite beauty

You have woken
inside of me
Love that I thought
was not to be

Like the sun
on the first of spring
Like the flower
as it starts blooming

You brought me hope
a new beginning
The warmth of love
to a heart that's freezing [comments] => 4 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 2 [informant] => baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Little Miss Orchid

Contributed by baronhawk on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 04:25:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Like a dream
upon a dark slumber
Like a breeze
upon a hot summer

You bring to me
a spark of fire
To light my heart's
dying ember

Like a song
of sweet harmony
Like a picture
of infinite beauty

You have woken
inside of me
Love that I thought
was not to be

Like the sun
on the first of spring
Like the flower
as it starts blooming

You brought me hope
a new beginning
The warmth of love
to a heart that's freezing

Copyright © baronhawk ... [ 2003-11-15 16:25:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Little Miss Orchid (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 04:27:52 PM AEST
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Very nice and sentimental. Nice write.

Re: Little Miss Orchid (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 04:34:54 PM AEST
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good write, you feel like you really love this person.. i hope you two stay together for a long time.

Re: Little Miss Orchid (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:28:53 PM AEST
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Awesomwly beautifull!
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: Little Miss Orchid (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 05:40:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful write ... soft and romantic ... Jan

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