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Signatures By
The Tired Lion

sitting tranquill, looking upon your beauty
casting unlived dreams beneath your light,
sighing in weariness and enchanted wonder
what be the destiny of this, my life?

i relent, no more can this man endure
where arrows fly and death saith die,
yet ever sending forth spirit and purpose
faire moon so close to heaven's breath,

brief interlude of quiet rest whilst darkness
comes within my forest of calm respite,
to live a noble life of valor or succumb
bedimmed as blood flows making bodies lilly white.

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veementi and the moon

Contributed by ladyfawn on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 04:45:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Signatures By
The Tired Lion

sitting tranquill, looking upon your beauty
casting unlived dreams beneath your light,
sighing in weariness and enchanted wonder
what be the destiny of this, my life?

i relent, no more can this man endure
where arrows fly and death saith die,
yet ever sending forth spirit and purpose
faire moon so close to heaven's breath,

brief interlude of quiet rest whilst darkness
comes within my forest of calm respite,
to live a noble life of valor or succumb
bedimmed as blood flows making bodies lilly white.

Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2003-11-16 16:45:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: veementi and the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:22:00 PM AEST
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beautiful!!!!!! when can we read the whole story? can't wait.....

hugs

merry

Re: veementi and the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by jaavys on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:49:07 AM AEST
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Well this is very good, how old is your son?

Re: veementi and the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:18:33 PM AEST
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Great write Nessa! And a novel? How cool is THAT??? Good luck with it!
~T

Re: veementi and the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 12:48:03 AM AEST
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wow.. it seems a great write..
" blood flows making bodies lily white"
hehe..wonderful. venkat

Re: veementi and the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 01:57:43 PM AEST
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beautiful your son has your talent look forward to reading the rest

Re: veementi and the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 21st July 2014 @ 12:02:26 PM AEST
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This is excellent
I really like the way it flows,
I wanna read the story.....

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