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Array ( [sid] => 27283 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => brocken wings [time] => 2003-11-17 01:57:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => don't you see
i've lost my wings
i can't spread them
and fly to you

everythig has shattered
like glass
my heart
my soul
and the memories
you just had to say
goodbye

now
you want me
to come back
now you want
something
everybody wants
what
everybody can't have

you see me
so pretty
here all alone
no tears
a smile
and
you hate yourself
you made a mistake
lettin' me go
now you see
but its just to late
i'm over it

though my wings
are brocken
my hearts shattered
and my eyes
burned from the tears
i'm allright
i realized
that though i thought that
i was the one
so special
that i had everything
b/c i had you
that is was all just
some game
a fantasy
and i'm better without you
b/c theres more to life
than you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 21 [informant] => ml03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

brocken wings

Contributed by ml03 on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:57:54 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

don't you see
i've lost my wings
i can't spread them
and fly to you

everythig has shattered
like glass
my heart
my soul
and the memories
you just had to say
goodbye

now
you want me
to come back
now you want
something
everybody wants
what
everybody can't have

you see me
so pretty
here all alone
no tears
a smile
and
you hate yourself
you made a mistake
lettin' me go
now you see
but its just to late
i'm over it

though my wings
are brocken
my hearts shattered
and my eyes
burned from the tears
i'm allright
i realized
that though i thought that
i was the one
so special
that i had everything
b/c i had you
that is was all just
some game
a fantasy
and i'm better without you
b/c theres more to life
than you

Copyright Â© ml03 ... [ 2003-11-17 01:57:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: brocken wings (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 02:21:15 AM AEST
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I certainly know how this one goes. Good for u for not falling for it again!
good work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: brocken wings (User Rating: 1 )
by kolbrun on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 08:32:40 AM AEST
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I agree one hundred per cent m103....well wriiten and well said

always Kolbrún

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