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Array ( [sid] => 27297 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A CANDLE [time] => 2003-11-17 07:47:48 [hometext] => Like a glowing candle do you have warmth in your heart and soul? [bodytext] => He carefully lit the stem,
and set it next to him.
And this is what we heard.
"A candle, much like our life.
Flickering, and trying to stand,
Winds wail, our careful hand.
It's warmth of our hearts,
and melted wax below.
I love candles, relaxing,
memories will grow.

Like our lives unknown,
It's life remains in it's flow..
A top the wax that melts
so it's radiance may glow.
Steady flame, tranquility...
Aura....looking o'er
end of a day's remorse, and
sadness turned to lore.
As the heart warms the wax
that melts down below.

It's warmth encourages kind thoughts
no regrets, or threats,
Breathing will entice the flame.
Endurance, no blame,
brings it back again....
The wax will continue to melt
as the warmth in our soul
can be felt, down below.

Canyon created, high walls.
Glass enclosure, no falls.
Mesmerizing pattern shade.
Calmness, unafraid.
A loving heart's warmth,
Invisible hurts or echo,
are melted like wax
down below.

When the light grows dim
There's a stillness within
Yet the warmth of a heart,
and the warmth of that soul,
Will still remain,
in the wax,
melted down below."


Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
"Have warmth in your soul"
November 2003 [comments] => 11 [counter] => 359 [topic] => 21 [informant] => lovingcritters [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
A CANDLE

Contributed by lovingcritters on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 07:47:48 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



He carefully lit the stem,
and set it next to him.
And this is what we heard.
"A candle, much like our life.
Flickering, and trying to stand,
Winds wail, our careful hand.
It's warmth of our hearts,
and melted wax below.
I love candles, relaxing,
memories will grow.

Like our lives unknown,
It's life remains in it's flow..
A top the wax that melts
so it's radiance may glow.
Steady flame, tranquility...
Aura....looking o'er
end of a day's remorse, and
sadness turned to lore.
As the heart warms the wax
that melts down below.

It's warmth encourages kind thoughts
no regrets, or threats,
Breathing will entice the flame.
Endurance, no blame,
brings it back again....
The wax will continue to melt
as the warmth in our soul
can be felt, down below.

Canyon created, high walls.
Glass enclosure, no falls.
Mesmerizing pattern shade.
Calmness, unafraid.
A loving heart's warmth,
Invisible hurts or echo,
are melted like wax
down below.

When the light grows dim
There's a stillness within
Yet the warmth of a heart,
and the warmth of that soul,
Will still remain,
in the wax,
melted down below."


Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
"Have warmth in your soul"
November 2003




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Re: A CANDLE (User Rating: 1 )
by kolbrun on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 08:27:59 AM AEST
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This is excellent work with a strong message. Looking forward to more from you.

always Kolbrún


Re: A CANDLE (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 09:00:50 AM AEST
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hmmmmmm nice work man..try n read my "by the highway:"...


Re: A CANDLE (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 09:36:41 AM AEST
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i really liked this poem


Re: A CANDLE (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:21:18 AM AEST
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beautiful and very true life message here
michelle


Re: A CANDLE (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:45:31 AM AEST
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Ma tres chere, cherrie Sue Con!

Lovely poem to sweet and gentle as the candle is glowing.
Let the candle glow, let it glo! let te light shine!!!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful work with us.
Thanks likewise for your sweet words to "St. Elizabeth Ode"
Today is her high Feast. We had no school when I was a child, - only celebrations in her honor!
Love
Elisabeth Dandy


Re: A CANDLE (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:54:57 AM AEST
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Wow Con that was really good. Very inspirational to boot.


Re: A CANDLE (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 04:18:57 PM AEST
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like a moth to the flame ...i am...to your words......brilliant!!!!


Re: A CANDLE (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 12:50:02 AM AEST
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Beautiful message..venkat


Re: A CANDLE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 08:49:39 AM AEST
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Lovely and so inspiring, Connie... the analogy was just superb....
Jenni


Re: A CANDLE (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 05:07:32 AM AEST
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Dear Connie, wonderful, so real.. I loved it a lot, aika:-)


Re: A CANDLE (User Rating: 1 )
by infedelity_hurts on Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 09:38:08 PM AEST
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i very much liked.. you have a strange style of poetry... nothing like mine... i dont know if its a good or bad thing... see wat you think... have a look at some of the things ive posted...tell me wat you think...

i like your work alot... i've read a few...this one deserved a comment




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