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Hides a tear stained face;
In the light of day -
Everything seems so perfect.

Looking for something to hold on to,
Searching for a purpose...

Longing to move forward
Trying to forget the past...
Reaching for a destination,
Beyond all the doubt -
But its just too far out of grasp.

The sound of a heart breaking
Is silent,
Therefore; No one will ever know -
The feelings I hide behind a smile...
Or the memories that won't let go. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 385 [topic] => 22 [informant] => harshreality [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Memories

Contributed by harshreality on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:01:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You'd never guess the black of night
Hides a tear stained face;
In the light of day -
Everything seems so perfect.

Looking for something to hold on to,
Searching for a purpose...

Longing to move forward
Trying to forget the past...
Reaching for a destination,
Beyond all the doubt -
But its just too far out of grasp.

The sound of a heart breaking
Is silent,
Therefore; No one will ever know -
The feelings I hide behind a smile...
Or the memories that won't let go.

Copyright © harshreality ... [ 2003-11-17 22:01:16]
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Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Rissa on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:25:21 PM AEST
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I like the verse-form that that's written in.

And the overall poem's really good, too.

Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:54:39 PM AEST
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I may know more than you think believe me.
This is a great open honest write, nice style as well. Welcome to YPDC Ill be watching for more of your work.
michelle

Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 12:46:31 AM AEST
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Dear Harshreality,
Your name fits you well,
For inside of you is a heart that is blue!
Your poem was absolutely marvelous.
Will touch each heart of all of us!

Welcome aboard HarshR we are so glad you came to join us here at YPDC...
You'll find we are a very loving group, and will never leave you behind.
Lovingcritters and poets too.
ConSue

Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:29:33 AM AEST
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Yes! I love the line " a heart beaking is silent"
Sadness beautifully penned,
Well done

Larry

Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:03:27 PM AEST
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that is so my laugh i laugh to hide the pain so no will know.... wow..... just.... damn

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