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Array ( [sid] => 27536 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To commit suicide [time] => 2003-11-20 17:23:07 [hometext] => these were really my thoughts. But fortunately it is over me.... [bodytext] => I am very stressed
I am very down
I want to commit suicide
but.. but I do not know how

I am only afraid
that I will not die straight
there are very many ways
but..which one is accurate?

If I imagine I jump off the bridge
I break my bones badly
and then only will be
disabled?

Now I am thinking about the sense of my life...
I was born,
I grew up
I got education
I am healthy
I can laugh or cry
I am....

I am...

Who gave me the right
so easily to die
Who gave me the right
to touch my life?

There were many who had to die
and they did not want to,
or had happy lives
Who gave ME the right?

No, I can not, I simply can´t
crying like a child
turning my back, running home
and repeating : No, No, NO

Oh, poor girl
use your brain
Think about your life
really you have many reasons to die?

For few troubles of life
forgot all happy times
forgot your laughters
forgot your happy cries

Stop, stop and turn back
stop again, and look ahead
Stop, shout loud
your misery,your woe

Look, every life
has minus and plus
and without troubles
you would not cherish happiness

how about your family,
how about your friends?
and if not them,
it is just YOU
who has to live

So what? Go home,
cry it out
breath it out
and.. create your new world.


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To commit suicide

Contributed by Aika on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 05:23:07 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I am very stressed
I am very down
I want to commit suicide
but.. but I do not know how

I am only afraid
that I will not die straight
there are very many ways
but..which one is accurate?

If I imagine I jump off the bridge
I break my bones badly
and then only will be
disabled?

Now I am thinking about the sense of my life...
I was born,
I grew up
I got education
I am healthy
I can laugh or cry
I am....

I am...

Who gave me the right
so easily to die
Who gave me the right
to touch my life?

There were many who had to die
and they did not want to,
or had happy lives
Who gave ME the right?

No, I can not, I simply can´t
crying like a child
turning my back, running home
and repeating : No, No, NO

Oh, poor girl
use your brain
Think about your life
really you have many reasons to die?

For few troubles of life
forgot all happy times
forgot your laughters
forgot your happy cries

Stop, stop and turn back
stop again, and look ahead
Stop, shout loud
your misery,your woe

Look, every life
has minus and plus
and without troubles
you would not cherish happiness

how about your family,
how about your friends?
and if not them,
it is just YOU
who has to live

So what? Go home,
cry it out
breath it out
and.. create your new world.






Copyright © Aika ... [ 2003-11-20 17:23:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: To commit suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 05:37:43 PM AEST
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Awwww Aika...I am so glad you are over it... I'm sure you never regretted it... You have so much to live for... you are a wonderful poet, for starters.... and I'm sure there are so many other reasons for living... so as you said... START LIVING!!! Create your new world....

Hugs and Love,
Jenni


Re: To commit suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 02:09:36 AM AEST
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Very good ending..create your new world.. hope you the best.. venkat


Re: To commit suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Sonibe on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 11:40:15 AM AEST
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....I know how you feel, I've tried to commit suicide many times with many different blades....but none of them penetrated my flesh....so I decided to stop trying and just live life through until this body expires....I really like your poem, therefore, I say, "bravo, bravo"....

Sonibè


Re: To commit suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 12:53:02 PM AEST
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I hope you never have any reason to feel this way again.The world will be a sadder place without you in it...........that is for sure !!!
Just remember that even on your darkest days there will always be someone or something to show you the light

steve xx




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