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[aid] => mick
[title] => Final Thoughts, Final Revision
[time] => 2003-11-22 05:59:08
[hometext] => Who cares, anyway?
[bodytext] => Again I sit here bleeding Hand too weak to hold the pen Blood and tears mix together On the scrap of paper containing the words As I bathe in deja vu Finding myself in a perpetual spiral I've scribed my final words For the very last time The lines are drawn The letters are in place Am I strong enough For the ultimate weakness Again I sit here crying I go deeper this time around Skin splinters outward Exposing the poisoned blood Each successive line widens further A crescendo in red The note is half soaked Still barely legible The lines are drawn The letters are in place Am I strong enough For the ultimate weakness Again I sit here writing The works that will survive me The only reason I continue on Is to complete the tale Deeper still I go Knuckles become white with force It flows as magma, searing and red My inspiration for the conclusion The lines are drawn The letters are in place Am I strong enough (this time) For the ultimate weakness The lines are drawn Over those previously faded I've relinquished my soul And lost to my own weakness [comments] => 2 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Vitreous_Soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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