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Array ( [sid] => 27646 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ever cut yourself? [time] => 2003-11-22 10:45:40 [hometext] => I'm submitting this for a friend as she thinks all her writing is bad and will not post herself. All comments are welcome and appreciated [bodytext] => EVER CUT YOURSELF TO FEEL THE PAIN
SEE IF THE EMPTYNESS INSIDE GOES AWAY
IS IT REPLACED WITH THE PAIN FOR JUST ONE DAY
EVER CUT YOURSELF TO SEE HOW RED THE BLOOD GETS
OR HOW LONG IT TAKES BEFORE YOU GET WEAK AND PASS OUT
OR EVEN DIE
EVER BEEN TEMPTED WITH A KNIFE
OR STARE DOWN THE BARREL OF A 45
AND SMELL THE POWDER
WONDER IF IT WILL BURN OR EVEN HURT WILL IT SHATTER YOU IN TWO
IF YOU PULL THE CHAMBER BACK
WILL BLOOD FLY AND THAT'LL BE THE END OF YOUR SO CALLED LIFE
YOUR LIVING HERE IN A WORLD YOU CALL HELL
WHAT WILL PEOPLE SAY WHEN YOUR NOT HERE ANYMORE
OR DID THEY EVEN TAKE THE TIME TO CARE
TO SAY A FINAL LAST GOOD BYE
OR WILL GOD SEND DOWN AN ANGEL OF HOPE
AND KEEP ME ALIVE TILL THE TIMES RIGHT
OR WILL THE DEVIL TEMPT ME TO MY GRAVE
AND KEEP PLAYING THIS DEADLY GAME
JUST TA TAKE MY SOUL
TO A DARK FORGOTTEN PLACE CALLED HELL ...
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 305 [topic] => 13 [informant] => mercedes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Ever cut yourself?

Contributed by mercedes on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:45:40 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



EVER CUT YOURSELF TO FEEL THE PAIN
SEE IF THE EMPTYNESS INSIDE GOES AWAY
IS IT REPLACED WITH THE PAIN FOR JUST ONE DAY
EVER CUT YOURSELF TO SEE HOW RED THE BLOOD GETS
OR HOW LONG IT TAKES BEFORE YOU GET WEAK AND PASS OUT
OR EVEN DIE
EVER BEEN TEMPTED WITH A KNIFE
OR STARE DOWN THE BARREL OF A 45
AND SMELL THE POWDER
WONDER IF IT WILL BURN OR EVEN HURT WILL IT SHATTER YOU IN TWO
IF YOU PULL THE CHAMBER BACK
WILL BLOOD FLY AND THAT'LL BE THE END OF YOUR SO CALLED LIFE
YOUR LIVING HERE IN A WORLD YOU CALL HELL
WHAT WILL PEOPLE SAY WHEN YOUR NOT HERE ANYMORE
OR DID THEY EVEN TAKE THE TIME TO CARE
TO SAY A FINAL LAST GOOD BYE
OR WILL GOD SEND DOWN AN ANGEL OF HOPE
AND KEEP ME ALIVE TILL THE TIMES RIGHT
OR WILL THE DEVIL TEMPT ME TO MY GRAVE
AND KEEP PLAYING THIS DEADLY GAME
JUST TA TAKE MY SOUL
TO A DARK FORGOTTEN PLACE CALLED HELL ...




Copyright © mercedes ... [ 2003-11-22 10:45:40]
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Re: Ever cut yourself? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:54:31 AM AEST
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Very good work, written like a pro.
peace, joy,luv,
emy


Re: Ever cut yourself? (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 01:52:22 PM AEST
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a good use of strong imagery I could feel the despair, good write


Re: Ever cut yourself? (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 02:09:02 PM AEST
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Yes well written! You shouldnt be ambarressed to share words from the soul!!1

mckayla


Re: Ever cut yourself? (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 07:39:08 AM AEST
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thank you mer,
just wanted ta say thanks for posting it on the site and thank you all for taking the time ta read and comment on it
rae'rae




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