Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 02-June 10:45:07 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 27660 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => jack frost [time] => 2003-11-22 15:19:26 [hometext] => who is this mysterious fellow... [bodytext] => a pattern on the windowpane
my icy fingers trace
the frozen filligree
until the sun melts it away
i strain to see the artist
who painted this for me
but he is long gone and distant
before i rose from sleep
i wonder did he watch over me
drawing pictures while i dreamt
was he the shadow in the dark
the prince i could not see?
will he return with steamy breath
to greet the frosty morn
his words are woven in the mist
imprinted as a kiss

gmm2003 [comments] => 11 [counter] => 1378 [topic] => 27 [informant] => Merry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 78 [ratings] => 20 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )
jack frost

Contributed by Merry on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:19:26 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



a pattern on the windowpane
my icy fingers trace
the frozen filligree
until the sun melts it away
i strain to see the artist
who painted this for me
but he is long gone and distant
before i rose from sleep
i wonder did he watch over me
drawing pictures while i dreamt
was he the shadow in the dark
the prince i could not see?
will he return with steamy breath
to greet the frosty morn
his words are woven in the mist
imprinted as a kiss

gmm2003




Copyright © Merry ... [ 2003-11-22 15:19:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: jack frost (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:38:12 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I remember thinking like this when i was a child. I loved the pictures it made!! Great write!!

mckayla


Re: jack frost (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:53:28 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Another beautiful write Merry... as always the picture you paint with your words captivates me. :o)

Larry



Re: jack frost (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 04:42:27 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Beautifull, romantic, good write!
Very good!
peace, joy, luv,
emy


Re: jack frost (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 05:18:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
A super wonderful glorious write
---------------------------------------------
I'm sorry, oh so sorry, me,
now no longer can I see,
your nicey, icy filligree
I live these days in Floridee


Re: jack frost (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 09:18:17 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Lovely write Merry ... great imagery ... Jan


Re: jack frost (User Rating: 1 )
by maryetta on Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 02:48:26 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
i really enjoyed this poem, very good write indeed.

maryetta


Re: jack frost (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:41:37 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
No icy comments on this delightful poem great write I enjoyed it very much thanks.

bernard.


Re: jack frost (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:48:31 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is a very cool write.


Re: jack frost (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 03:53:55 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
awww that's such a sweet poem!!!!!


Re: jack frost (User Rating: 1 )
by Infamous on Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 06:17:48 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
capivating!


Re: jack frost (User Rating: 1 )
by windowguy on Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 11:56:50 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Excellent description.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com