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She shook my world like a deep red sea
Sea of greatness and sea of glee
I have been endowed, I have been foreseen
I hope I can hold on forever
To the girl that talks and laughs to me

She falls in the clouds and I wish I were there
If she were to fade, my heart would tear
Face of an angel, soul of a goddess
Made in the heavens, she graces thee
This privilege unknown, to any man, but me

She turns the corner and smiles
This girl that talks and laughs to me
The light that beams is all but mild
It shines on truth and beauty and faith
It shows it all, in so many ways

God-given love more than human
Higher-power, tis my blessing from thee
Thank the lord; I have had the privilege to see
The girl that talks and laughs to me
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AMDA

Contributed by niceguysfinishlast on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:43:25 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



AD

She shook my world like a deep red sea
Sea of greatness and sea of glee
I have been endowed, I have been foreseen
I hope I can hold on forever
To the girl that talks and laughs to me

She falls in the clouds and I wish I were there
If she were to fade, my heart would tear
Face of an angel, soul of a goddess
Made in the heavens, she graces thee
This privilege unknown, to any man, but me

She turns the corner and smiles
This girl that talks and laughs to me
The light that beams is all but mild
It shines on truth and beauty and faith
It shows it all, in so many ways

God-given love more than human
Higher-power, tis my blessing from thee
Thank the lord; I have had the privilege to see
The girl that talks and laughs to me




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Re: AMDA (User Rating: 1 )
by RainbowQueen on Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 03:09:41 AM AEST
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Sweetly written!


Re: AMDA (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 02:50:41 AM AEST
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This is a beautifully written poem about an apparently very special young lady. She must be very proud to have a poem like this written for her. You have a lot of talent.

Rita




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