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Roll The Dice
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 02:13:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Roll the dice
I watch me breathe
Whispers unspoken taunt me
Rip off my ears
Let the blood flow down my neck
Feeling warm yet again
Crashing into my mind
With thoughts of unspokens
Missing all the memories
We never could remember
Break me down further
And love me everyday
Destroy what little I call my own
Ruin my foundations in each and every way
While I sit here
Holding my ears in each hand
You run away with my dignity
Roll the dice and guess my wish
See the hope dive further into misery
Watch me as I breathe
Falling into tomorrow
Stumbling over the dice on the floor
Falling into the puddles of red
Ears laying soundless
Lying awake yet again
Losing all sense of ending
And I'm waiting to begin
Roll the dice for tomorrow
Pick lucky numbers for today
Lose yourself in my feelings
Help me find my way
Light the path and close me out
Tear my wishes with your thorns
Sitting here waiting for nothing
Ignoring the pleas my heart warns
Coming into me
Crashing through my escaping mind
Roll the dice just one more time
Crash and roll forever
Addicted to gambling my heart away
Whisper breathless
Cry so endless
As you come crashing into me
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Re: Roll The Dice
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 03:12:47 AM AEST
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| Nice. Breathe is my favourite word and you've put it to good use here. |
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Re: Roll The Dice
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 06:33:01 AM AEST
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I thought this was good...thanks for sharing.
Emma. |
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Re: Roll The Dice
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by M on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:08:05 PM AEST
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This is amazing! The last three lines work really well. Well done!
EmilyxXx |
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Re: Roll The Dice
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 11:09:36 AM AEST
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| Sounds painful but I really liked the last 4 lines there. I thought all in all it was a good write. |
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