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Array ( [sid] => 28124 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What a Dream [time] => 2003-11-28 01:28:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Moving, waiting, always there
Missing, being, never care

Words spoken softer
And feelings hitting stronger

Never moving from what I think I know
And changing the moments when I met you
Never thinking there's something out there for me
Always finding other things to think and do

There hasn't been a time in my life
When you haven't been on my mind
I don't think there ever will

Moving, waiting, anything
Setting my own fires aside
Burning forever for you, even still

Only finding sorrow
The smiles on your face
Words you spoke so soft
And things I never could erase

Times you chose to forget
And times that never last
Close your eyes and run away
Closing down the past

Never thinking
The moments I met you
No time in my life
Occupy something else

The looks I have tonight
And the smiles on your face
Things I spoke so soft
Take me from this place

Crinkle in corners
Close those beautiful eyes
Speak those things softer to me
Pray that this is the only time my heart dies

Softer now
Speak those words to me
In whispers that we echo
Make things happily

Never lying to myself
Do it everyday
Moving, waiting, anything

Must find my own way

Losing, trusting, ending
Never working out

Things never fair
Not even coming close

Forced to watch my life unfold
Containing secrets never told

I lied to you
And I lied to myself
When I said I'm always okay

Crashing, turning, anything

Cuts run deep
With blood everywhere
Glass closes my eyes
And pavement scratches me

Falling always
Never care
Taking from the empty cup
Swallowing all my air

Live again, pray my soul

Kill me tonight
Rip my spine from my back

Leave my eyes here freezing
Tears gleaming on my face

Moving, waiting, anything
Take me from this place

Bleeding all over the floor
Making a beautiful mess
My blood forms faces on the ground
What a beautiful mess

A dream I'll never wake from
A nightmare I cannot escape
Get me the hell out of here
And take me from this place

Lying myself to sleep
And lying here awake
Telling myself hopeful things for so long
Grinding my teeth until they break

Lied my face off
And dropped this awful mask
Cuts that run deep to me
Scars that will always crack

Crack the flood
Burn the bridge
Grab your torch and burn me still

Moving, waiting, anything
Crashing, turning, anything

Speak a little softer
Whispers that run deeper than the scars
Empty the room with nothing

Fill my mind with work related stress

Speaking softer
Floating across the ground
Glass fills my entire head
And I'll never hear a sound




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What a Dream

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 01:28:10 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Moving, waiting, always there
Missing, being, never care

Words spoken softer
And feelings hitting stronger

Never moving from what I think I know
And changing the moments when I met you
Never thinking there's something out there for me
Always finding other things to think and do

There hasn't been a time in my life
When you haven't been on my mind
I don't think there ever will

Moving, waiting, anything
Setting my own fires aside
Burning forever for you, even still

Only finding sorrow
The smiles on your face
Words you spoke so soft
And things I never could erase

Times you chose to forget
And times that never last
Close your eyes and run away
Closing down the past

Never thinking
The moments I met you
No time in my life
Occupy something else

The looks I have tonight
And the smiles on your face
Things I spoke so soft
Take me from this place

Crinkle in corners
Close those beautiful eyes
Speak those things softer to me
Pray that this is the only time my heart dies

Softer now
Speak those words to me
In whispers that we echo
Make things happily

Never lying to myself
Do it everyday
Moving, waiting, anything

Must find my own way

Losing, trusting, ending
Never working out

Things never fair
Not even coming close

Forced to watch my life unfold
Containing secrets never told

I lied to you
And I lied to myself
When I said I'm always okay

Crashing, turning, anything

Cuts run deep
With blood everywhere
Glass closes my eyes
And pavement scratches me

Falling always
Never care
Taking from the empty cup
Swallowing all my air

Live again, pray my soul

Kill me tonight
Rip my spine from my back

Leave my eyes here freezing
Tears gleaming on my face

Moving, waiting, anything
Take me from this place

Bleeding all over the floor
Making a beautiful mess
My blood forms faces on the ground
What a beautiful mess

A dream I'll never wake from
A nightmare I cannot escape
Get me the hell out of here
And take me from this place

Lying myself to sleep
And lying here awake
Telling myself hopeful things for so long
Grinding my teeth until they break

Lied my face off
And dropped this awful mask
Cuts that run deep to me
Scars that will always crack

Crack the flood
Burn the bridge
Grab your torch and burn me still

Moving, waiting, anything
Crashing, turning, anything

Speak a little softer
Whispers that run deeper than the scars
Empty the room with nothing

Fill my mind with work related stress

Speaking softer
Floating across the ground
Glass fills my entire head
And I'll never hear a sound








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Re: What a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 02:10:19 AM AEST
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very dark.. but well written..




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