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Array ( [sid] => 28208 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Then (Than), tricky; Friends? [time] => 2003-11-29 14:07:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Then (Than), tricky; Friends?

Friendship is subjective,
and the subject of
being subjected to:

false, fleeting friendships,

are you.

and trust, a tricky thing –
you must be sure to think

before,
People, you want to open up to,
Girls, you want to open up for you

which is the main
distraction, destruction,
the pain;
this is always to be avoided,

or voided,
your friendships
may be,
You see
hurt you can’t be, when alone,

but a lone cold frozen form
needs companions to keep warm

SO…

If you’ve found you’ve hurt your friends,
approach them now and make amends,

(I’ll quit this poignant rhyming then.)
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 290 [topic] => 48 [informant] => SensitiveSoAbused [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Then (Than), tricky; Friends?

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:07:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Then (Than), tricky; Friends?

Friendship is subjective,
and the subject of
being subjected to:

false, fleeting friendships,

are you.

and trust, a tricky thing –
you must be sure to think

before,
People, you want to open up to,
Girls, you want to open up for you

which is the main
distraction, destruction,
the pain;
this is always to be avoided,

or voided,
your friendships
may be,
You see
hurt you can’t be, when alone,

but a lone cold frozen form
needs companions to keep warm

SO…

If you’ve found you’ve hurt your friends,
approach them now and make amends,

(I’ll quit this poignant rhyming then.)

Copyright © SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2003-11-29 14:07:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Then (Than), tricky; Friends? (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:09:25 PM AEST
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This was an interesting write but I liked it and the message.

Re: Then (Than), tricky; Friends? (User Rating: 1 )
by scarykitten on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:51:17 PM AEST
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This poem reminds me when my mom said that you would be lucky if you could find that one true friend befor you die

Re: Then (Than), tricky; Friends? (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 05:08:17 PM AEST
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i think i only have to true friends in this world....your words are so scarry you almost sound as if your threatning me.....very strong and powerful.....i like it.....well done

Re: Then (Than), tricky; Friends? (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 11:37:33 PM AEST
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You find out who your true friends are soon enough don't you. I have lost many friends, whom I thought were true...But pleased to say that I have two true friends that I trust with my whole heart and would never wanna hurt them. Distance (Moving away) shouldn't end the friendship either...good write, I love the message because I have been hurt by supposedly my friends and they never made amends...but thanks for sharing this. All the best.

Emma.

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