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Aura
Contributed by
outsider
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Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 08:01:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What is that aura you have around you,
Surely you cannot be real.
What did I do to deserve this
Extraordinary love I feel.
That light that shines from your eyes
Bright and unreal could glow in the dark.
Your loving passion ignites my flame
With your incandescent spark.
Your inner beauty even exceeds your outer
Which is no mean feat I realise.
Your generosity of spirit and unconditional kindness
Leave me in constant surprise.
How long will it last.
A piece of string comes to mind.
I want it to last forever,
Neither of us be left behind.
You can Turn The Page with apparent ease
And your unending humour gladdens my heart.
Angel you have an aura around you,
I knew you were the one right from the start.
Copyright ©
outsider
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2002-07-13 08:01:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Aura
(User Rating: 1 ) by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 08:07:13 AM AEST (User
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I'm not generally too keen on this type of stuf but have to say I really liked this - I think it's because you have made it so personal and directed 'To the one you love' it has a great one to one feel - great writing this.
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Re: Aura
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chrissie on
Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 09:13:42 AM AEST (User
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This is beautiful indeed..well written as always
Chrissie x |
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Re: Aura
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lovingangel4u on
Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM AEST (User
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I love this one u are a wonderful poet. :) |
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