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Death
Contributed by
Iesha
on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 12:52:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The bullet enters my flesh
I can feel the blood trickle out of my wound
I am going to die.
I was only walking
Sure it was in the wrong neighborhood but I never thought it could happen to me
I think I am dying
Is this how my life is going to end?
Here alone in some alley
Will no one stop me from dying?
When will our world be safe?
Can we ever be safe?
Will there ever be peace?
Will the death stop?
I gasp for my breath
My clothes are soaked from the blood.
My final breath leaves me
I am finally dead
Caught in the line of fire not in a battle, or a war
I was only walking
Sure it was in the wrong neighborhood but I never thought it could happen to me
I dyed because of violence in our streets
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Iesha
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2003-12-03 00:52:54]
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Re: Death
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by ArdRi79 on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 08:44:48 AM AEST
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| your point comes across clearly and the imagery is very graphic that was good too |
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