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tearing to shreds
slicing a brave heart to ribbons
this endless battle rages on
and i am tired, so very tired

i hear your hopeless crying in the distance
a lost child of zion
cold and alone yet fearless and brave
you gather your courage
girded for war and the death that it brings

will this day ever end, this battle be saved?
the struggle against all odds
reveals the strength in your nature
lost child of zion
take heart in your pain and survive

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inner battle

Contributed by Merry on Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 04:57:15 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

why won't torment lay down it's sharp sword?
tearing to shreds
slicing a brave heart to ribbons
this endless battle rages on
and i am tired, so very tired

i hear your hopeless crying in the distance
a lost child of zion
cold and alone yet fearless and brave
you gather your courage
girded for war and the death that it brings

will this day ever end, this battle be saved?
the struggle against all odds
reveals the strength in your nature
lost child of zion
take heart in your pain and survive

gmm2003

Copyright © Merry ... [ 2003-12-03 16:57:15]
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Re: inner battle (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 10:47:04 PM AEST
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A work of art and words of true inspiration,
Beautifully done

Re: inner battle (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 01:23:53 AM AEST
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I loved this very uplifting I hope you show this to your friend. Very well written and put together.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: inner battle (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 08:39:14 AM AEST
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Such beauty in your words. Awesome poem!

Re: inner battle (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 07:50:49 PM AEST
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excellent, interesting and caring poem, as always i love your poetry:) hugs n' love nessa

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