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Know me nomore
Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 08:23:54 PM in AEST
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Silent whispers travel
the space in my eyes.
Pictures on the walls in my head
play back memories
of years i wanted to forget.
Innocence of childhood years
crawl back to my hardened heart.
Looking at reflections in the mirror
I see a face i never know,
holding back the innocence i lost.
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2003-12-04 20:23:54]
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Re: Know me nomore
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by juliette on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 08:40:42 PM AEST
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Such an intimate write for so short a poem. I really like it. Keep them coming! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Know me nomore
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by Kie on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 09:11:04 PM AEST
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I found this so very sweet. It touched my heart.
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Re: Know me nomore
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 06:31:39 PM AEST
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Anyone can reach that innocence. It hasn't gone it's just buried under layers and layers of bitter experience.
But when you meet sincerity, love and gentleness they will lift the heavy layers.
I find constantly, poems I read (and write)
here on YPDC have this effect on me.
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