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Array ( [sid] => 29060 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why [time] => 2003-12-10 09:02:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Between you and me a life full of memories
Like pirates on a ship called friends we sailed the seven seas
We were introduced to life from kids to adults we grew
Been through it all but I was always there for you
We were young and we was dumb but you know that we had heart
Laughing through the good and finding light amongst the dark
For ever we would walk to our final day of death
We personified friendship, right to our last breath

Why am I feeling this way?, just tell me what did I do?
Why am I dying this way?, I call but I cant see you
Why am I feeling this way?, this just don't feel right
Our friendship blows out the window into yesterdays night

So you back out, and drop me from a high height
Did you forget who was there when things were far from alright
If I had a penny for every time I picked you up of the floor
I could retire a happy man, living life as mine for ever more
Yet you take one instance and hold me so accountable
You picked me up once and now the pain is insurmountable
So you claim that its over and the friendships gone to hell
Well it seems that's the pattern of your life P that much you can surely tell

Why am I feeling this way?, just tell me what did I do?
Why am I dying this way?, I call but I cant see you
Why am I feeling this way?, this just don't feel right
Our friendship blows out the window into yesterdays night

No hear me as I say what's always been on my mind
A friend like you was a rare thing, truly one of a kind
But as you look in the mirror, remember this is down to you
Not a ***** thing I ever did, was ever to harm us two
So take whatever grudge is that you are ***** holding over me
Turn it round and you see it spells insanity
But the final hour of begging for forgiveness has just passed you by
Now the anger turns to pity I don't want to see you cry
So turn around and walk away, I feel sadness tinged with malice
I'll see you in heaven my one true friend..I wont forget our palace

Why am I feeling this way?, just tell me what did I do?
Why am I dying this way?, I call but I cant see you
Why am I feeling this way?, this just don't feel right
Our friendship blows out the window into yesterdays night

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Why

Contributed by korax on Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 09:02:31 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Between you and me a life full of memories
Like pirates on a ship called friends we sailed the seven seas
We were introduced to life from kids to adults we grew
Been through it all but I was always there for you
We were young and we was dumb but you know that we had heart
Laughing through the good and finding light amongst the dark
For ever we would walk to our final day of death
We personified friendship, right to our last breath

Why am I feeling this way?, just tell me what did I do?
Why am I dying this way?, I call but I cant see you
Why am I feeling this way?, this just don't feel right
Our friendship blows out the window into yesterdays night

So you back out, and drop me from a high height
Did you forget who was there when things were far from alright
If I had a penny for every time I picked you up of the floor
I could retire a happy man, living life as mine for ever more
Yet you take one instance and hold me so accountable
You picked me up once and now the pain is insurmountable
So you claim that its over and the friendships gone to hell
Well it seems that's the pattern of your life P that much you can surely tell

Why am I feeling this way?, just tell me what did I do?
Why am I dying this way?, I call but I cant see you
Why am I feeling this way?, this just don't feel right
Our friendship blows out the window into yesterdays night

No hear me as I say what's always been on my mind
A friend like you was a rare thing, truly one of a kind
But as you look in the mirror, remember this is down to you
Not a ***** thing I ever did, was ever to harm us two
So take whatever grudge is that you are ***** holding over me
Turn it round and you see it spells insanity
But the final hour of begging for forgiveness has just passed you by
Now the anger turns to pity I don't want to see you cry
So turn around and walk away, I feel sadness tinged with malice
I'll see you in heaven my one true friend..I wont forget our palace

Why am I feeling this way?, just tell me what did I do?
Why am I dying this way?, I call but I cant see you
Why am I feeling this way?, this just don't feel right
Our friendship blows out the window into yesterdays night





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Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 09:36:46 AM AEST
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With tears in my eyes, let me say that my heart goes out to you. We have all asked the why's and the only light, is simply time.

Hang in there...

Kie


Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 11:27:00 AM AEST
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this really is sad my heart is going out to you....you explaine your pain so well in this poem


Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 05:46:54 PM AEST
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Its hard enough finding a good friendship, to lose it like that is even worse. So sad but a great write.




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