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Array ( [sid] => 2914 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Still Play A Vital Part! [time] => 2002-08-28 12:50:37 [hometext] => Understanding is within, PLEASE DO NOT cease to be a vital cog in this wonderful wheel of a web site!
This is all I can ask. :-) [bodytext] => Understanding these words without any doubt,
Becoming quieter and quieter,
The louder the attempts to shout!

Did it stand not even half a chance?
Of developing into a lovingly warm friendship,
Because of thoughts of only a desire to romance.

Again this perception envisaged is possibly wrong,
As it has been with everyone met so far,
Must forever be the appearance of coming on too strong?

If only, If only, resigned to always think,
This soul having been given a glimpse of freedom,
Now again into that darkness affraid it might rapidly begin to sink.

Lifetime must be spent in this reality place,
Alone but unable to feel lonely with many thoughts,
This is a fate, when taught must learn to face.

Yes for knowing whom with these feelings deep inside,
But cannot and shall not be the one again,
Understanding too much about why those trying so to hide.

Silence is one of the qualities gained from hopes sacrifice,
So this one can be within these prayers,
For whom knowing in a heart, is honest and especially nice.

One day soon all will be explained why love needed so very much,
No doubt will dawn the understanding when written in poetry,
Why this skin will forever be, without so much as a touch.

Once having believed that the possibilities in life are endless,
Until this chasm like divide in an already harrowed path,
Made a name and dreams appear to be backwards!

Sorry and wishful that never leaving behind,
The knowledge and love gained from reading and writing,
To and from those whose dreams, prayers and thoughts will always be so kind. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Unaekseveer1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
Still Play A Vital Part!

Contributed by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 12:50:37 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Understanding these words without any doubt,
Becoming quieter and quieter,
The louder the attempts to shout!

Did it stand not even half a chance?
Of developing into a lovingly warm friendship,
Because of thoughts of only a desire to romance.

Again this perception envisaged is possibly wrong,
As it has been with everyone met so far,
Must forever be the appearance of coming on too strong?

If only, If only, resigned to always think,
This soul having been given a glimpse of freedom,
Now again into that darkness affraid it might rapidly begin to sink.

Lifetime must be spent in this reality place,
Alone but unable to feel lonely with many thoughts,
This is a fate, when taught must learn to face.

Yes for knowing whom with these feelings deep inside,
But cannot and shall not be the one again,
Understanding too much about why those trying so to hide.

Silence is one of the qualities gained from hopes sacrifice,
So this one can be within these prayers,
For whom knowing in a heart, is honest and especially nice.

One day soon all will be explained why love needed so very much,
No doubt will dawn the understanding when written in poetry,
Why this skin will forever be, without so much as a touch.

Once having believed that the possibilities in life are endless,
Until this chasm like divide in an already harrowed path,
Made a name and dreams appear to be backwards!

Sorry and wishful that never leaving behind,
The knowledge and love gained from reading and writing,
To and from those whose dreams, prayers and thoughts will always be so kind.




Copyright © Unaekseveer1 ... [ 2002-08-28 12:50:37]
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Re: Still Play A Vital Part! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 08:30:53 AM AEST
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very nice
a fine write


Re: Still Play A Vital Part! (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 09:18:27 PM AEST
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Thankyou Jackee,
I'm pleased you thought so, the inspiration for this came from a certain amount of panic at the thought of maybe losing a true friend!

Bloody thankfully this turned out not to be the case after all. PHEW!!

With love
Dean:-)




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