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Array ( [sid] => 29348 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Only Potent Therapy [time] => 2003-12-14 10:07:06 [hometext] => Didn't turn out how I thought it would when I started writing it... but it says what it means and means what it says. Basically... it's about unconditional love. [bodytext] => I love you when you sleep
When you hold me close and breathe my name
When you take me deep
When you set my body and soul aflame
I love you in the morning
When you never wanna let me go
And without a warning
Your hands light a fire down below

I love you when you talk to me
And everything you say comes out all wrong
And even when you fight with me
'Cause I respect the way you're so damn headstrong
I love you when you yell at me
And say things you never actually mean
And when you say you're leaving me
I love every piece of you that's obscene

I love you when you're dirty
And I love you when you're clean
I love you when you're sweet
And even when you're mean
Just don't push me around
Or throw me to the ground
And I'll keep on loving you
Until my time here is through

Sometimes I run away
'Cause I don't know how to deal with me
And the kiss of the blade
Is the only potent therapy
(When you sleep you take me deep)

Sometimes I get too much of you
But I swear there's nothing I want more
Sometimes I don't know what to do
With all this pain I can't escape anymore
(Breathe my name and set my soul aflame)

Love you when you're dirty
And love you when you're clean
Love you when you're sweet
Even when you're mean
(And everything obscene)
Don't push me around
Throw me to the ground
I'll still be loving you
When my life is through
(The kiss of the blade, my only potent therapy) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
The Only Potent Therapy

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:07:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I love you when you sleep
When you hold me close and breathe my name
When you take me deep
When you set my body and soul aflame
I love you in the morning
When you never wanna let me go
And without a warning
Your hands light a fire down below

I love you when you talk to me
And everything you say comes out all wrong
And even when you fight with me
'Cause I respect the way you're so damn headstrong
I love you when you yell at me
And say things you never actually mean
And when you say you're leaving me
I love every piece of you that's obscene

I love you when you're dirty
And I love you when you're clean
I love you when you're sweet
And even when you're mean
Just don't push me around
Or throw me to the ground
And I'll keep on loving you
Until my time here is through

Sometimes I run away
'Cause I don't know how to deal with me
And the kiss of the blade
Is the only potent therapy
(When you sleep you take me deep)

Sometimes I get too much of you
But I swear there's nothing I want more
Sometimes I don't know what to do
With all this pain I can't escape anymore
(Breathe my name and set my soul aflame)

Love you when you're dirty
And love you when you're clean
Love you when you're sweet
Even when you're mean
(And everything obscene)
Don't push me around
Throw me to the ground
I'll still be loving you
When my life is through
(The kiss of the blade, my only potent therapy)




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-12-14 10:07:06]
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Re: The Only Potent Therapy (User Rating: 1 )
by Malice on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:28:36 AM AEST
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Wonderful! Marvelous! I could just feel the emotions rushing into me through this poetry. Good job!


Re: The Only Potent Therapy (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 11:15:58 AM AEST
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I second that! Great job..

Kie


Re: The Only Potent Therapy (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 09:32:34 PM AEST
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great job and beatifully written of unconditional love.. you can feel the love from this poem that you have for your boyfriend.. awesome write!!! I liked this one alot

peace joy and hope
JENNA


Re: The Only Potent Therapy (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:33:42 PM AEST
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Moonlit, this is amazing. I don't care if it didn't turn out how you wanted it to, I like it and I think it's perfect just the way it is. Very beautiful emotional and wonderful write! Great job!

Blessings
Love, Jenna





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