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Array ( [sid] => 29477 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The swan / Labuť [time] => 2003-12-16 03:46:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => white swan just alighted on the deep lake
she does not know,what comes, poor
huge powers are looming
they ´re intending to trap her

quietly looking around,
she does not suppose,what is down there
suddenly she feels quivering
but does not know what it means

darkness with evil are coming to her
snow-white swan,looks so lovely
the darkness has grudge against her beauty
the evil relishes to tear off her heart

the swan heaves a groan
when her whiteness the evil enwraps with black
when evil so cutting and virulent
blunts her wings and binds her legs

pulling innocent swan under the water
virulence penetrates her heart and in a while...
blood from her heart
colours the water of lake

in the deep forest, dark lake
only a plumule and blood in the lake
from the swan - so innocent
so chilly silence, foreboding
when a flock of swans alighted......

bílá labuť na temné hluboké jezero dosedla,
ješte neví co ji čeká, chuděra
mocné síly se k hladině sápají
labuť polapit hodlají

klidně rozhlíží se kolem
netuší co děje se pod ní, tam dole
náhle ucítí chvění,
co to znamená zatím však netuší

to temnota se zlem blíží se k ní
labuť sněhobílá na hladině se skví
závidí temnota její jasnost spanilou
zlo si libuje, jak labuti srdce vyrvou

najednou labuť zasténá
když její bělost černí svou obalí temnota
když zlo bodavé a jedovaté
jí křídla ochromí a nohy sváže

stahují labuť nevinnou pod hladinu
jedovatost pronikne srdcem a za vteřinu....
krev ze srdce labuti
hladinu jezera obarví


v hlubokém lese, jezero temné
z labuti jasné, jen peřícko a krev na hladině
mrazivé ticho nechá tušit zlo
když v tom , hejno labutí dosedlo....... ..
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 340 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Aika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => czech [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
The swan Labuť

Contributed by Aika on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 03:46:36 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



white swan just alighted on the deep lake
she does not know,what comes, poor
huge powers are looming
they ´re intending to trap her

quietly looking around,
she does not suppose,what is down there
suddenly she feels quivering
but does not know what it means

darkness with evil are coming to her
snow-white swan,looks so lovely
the darkness has grudge against her beauty
the evil relishes to tear off her heart

the swan heaves a groan
when her whiteness the evil enwraps with black
when evil so cutting and virulent
blunts her wings and binds her legs

pulling innocent swan under the water
virulence penetrates her heart and in a while...
blood from her heart
colours the water of lake

in the deep forest, dark lake
only a plumule and blood in the lake
from the swan - so innocent
so chilly silence, foreboding
when a flock of swans alighted......

bílá labuť na temné hluboké jezero dosedla,
ješte neví co ji čeká, chuděra
mocné síly se k hladině sápají
labuť polapit hodlají

klidně rozhlíží se kolem
netuší co děje se pod ní, tam dole
náhle ucítí chvění,
co to znamená zatím však netuší

to temnota se zlem blíží se k ní
labuť sněhobílá na hladině se skví
závidí temnota její jasnost spanilou
zlo si libuje, jak labuti srdce vyrvou

najednou labuť zasténá
když její bělost černí svou obalí temnota
když zlo bodavé a jedovaté
jí křídla ochromí a nohy sváže

stahují labuť nevinnou pod hladinu
jedovatost pronikne srdcem a za vteřinu....
krev ze srdce labuti
hladinu jezera obarví


v hlubokém lese, jezero temné
z labuti jasné, jen peřícko a krev na hladině
mrazivé ticho nechá tušit zlo
když v tom , hejno labutí dosedlo....... ..




Copyright © Aika ... [ 2003-12-16 03:46:36]
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Re: The swan Labuť (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 04:26:22 AM AEST
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Aahgh..pitiable situation..good write. venkat


Re: The swan Labuť (User Rating: 1 )
by Redlantern2051 on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 08:07:17 AM AEST
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Poor little swan!!!! :-( Good stuff+++++


Re: The swan Labuť (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 11:58:46 AM AEST
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Very tragic, I was hoping you would resurrect her! I still like your loving poetry better!
Love you,
ConSue




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