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Array ( [sid] => 29520 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BRIAN 26th May 1938-10th June 2003 [time] => 2003-12-16 17:50:37 [hometext] => I was very honoured to be asked to read this at Brian's funeral,he used to come into the supermarket where I worked with his wife and he was such a lovely man, I showed him this poem before he died and he thought it was great. [bodytext] => I walk into work at approximately 10
In comes Pam and Brian
Oh no it's Thursday again!
What abuse will Brian throw at us today
But I'm sure we'll think of something
We'll never let it lay
He'll bash us with his trolley
Send us all around the store
Looking for things he doesn't really want
It does get such a bore
So when he's not looking
We'll add firelighters and peas
When he gets to the till
He find out we're a tease

So Brian we'll miss you
When you're no longer here
We'll think of you often when drinking our beer
We'll remember you dearly
And look out for your wife
Have a smile on our faces
When we celebrate your life. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 55 [informant] => AliB [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

BRIAN 26th May 1938-10th June 2003

Contributed by AliB on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 05:50:37 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I walk into work at approximately 10
In comes Pam and Brian
Oh no it's Thursday again!
What abuse will Brian throw at us today
But I'm sure we'll think of something
We'll never let it lay
He'll bash us with his trolley
Send us all around the store
Looking for things he doesn't really want
It does get such a bore
So when he's not looking
We'll add firelighters and peas
When he gets to the till
He find out we're a tease

So Brian we'll miss you
When you're no longer here
We'll think of you often when drinking our beer
We'll remember you dearly
And look out for your wife
Have a smile on our faces
When we celebrate your life.

Copyright © AliB ... [ 2003-12-16 17:50:37]
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Re: BRIAN 26th May 1938-10th June 2003 (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 11:30:29 PM AEST
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Awww.. I think this was so sweet... what a lovely and fun-filled write...and touching gesture..
Jenni

Re: BRIAN 26th May 1938-10th June 2003 (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 07:47:02 PM AEST
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What a loving tribute, and how honored for you, that you read it for him and his loved ones too!
I especially like the part about his wife, and how you will look after her!
You have a loving heart...she will never forget...you did your loving part!
ConSue

Re: BRIAN 26th May 1938-10th June 2003 (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:51:36 AM AEST
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AAWW How sad & yet sweet for him a beautiful tribute in his honor! Christina

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