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Array ( [sid] => 29529 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death [time] => 2003-12-16 19:57:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Death.....
Why do you surround my broken heart?

You stay around to torture me,
and hear my relentless cries.
You've taken one too many people
and left them there to die.

I learn to trust once again,
to love and share,
But just as I have almosted learned
you tear them away again.

Your you set on making my life a living hell?
Or is it your pleasure in hearing me yell?
I am doomed forevery to be followed by you,
and to never be loved?

You took my great-grandparents before I was even born,
you took my grandparents when I was only four.
When I got a step-great-grandma,
I finally got to meet her and she was really fun.
But after I left and a few months later,
you took her away from me again,
and tortured my heart forever.

Then I made a new best friend,
he was the only one I trusted.
No he may not of been human
but that bond could have never been broken.

I learned to trust and love again
he taught me very well.
But then he left without a goodbye,
and put my life into a living hell.

I have learned right now to not love anyone,
because I would hate to lose them.
I just can't suffer anymore,
I can't have my heart broken.

So if you ever meet me on the street or in school,
I might come as ignorant, selfish, and rude.
But I do not mean to be this way,
I am just trying to protect me and you.

I don't hate society or anyone else,
I just don't know how to love. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 511 [topic] => 13 [informant] => saddarkgirlreingsthenight [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Death

Contributed by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 07:57:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Death.....
Why do you surround my broken heart?

You stay around to torture me,
and hear my relentless cries.
You've taken one too many people
and left them there to die.

I learn to trust once again,
to love and share,
But just as I have almosted learned
you tear them away again.

Your you set on making my life a living hell?
Or is it your pleasure in hearing me yell?
I am doomed forevery to be followed by you,
and to never be loved?

You took my great-grandparents before I was even born,
you took my grandparents when I was only four.
When I got a step-great-grandma,
I finally got to meet her and she was really fun.
But after I left and a few months later,
you took her away from me again,
and tortured my heart forever.

Then I made a new best friend,
he was the only one I trusted.
No he may not of been human
but that bond could have never been broken.

I learned to trust and love again
he taught me very well.
But then he left without a goodbye,
and put my life into a living hell.

I have learned right now to not love anyone,
because I would hate to lose them.
I just can't suffer anymore,
I can't have my heart broken.

So if you ever meet me on the street or in school,
I might come as ignorant, selfish, and rude.
But I do not mean to be this way,
I am just trying to protect me and you.

I don't hate society or anyone else,
I just don't know how to love.

Copyright © saddarkgirlreingsthenight ... [ 2003-12-16 19:57:16]
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Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 08:22:08 PM AEST
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Very moving, excellent. Thank you for sharing. Sometimes I think, I'm all alone, but then again I wonder, just listen to the winds sweet song, and death will never linger.

Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 04:51:13 AM AEST
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I can understand why you would want to do this. Losing someone is a hard thing to go through. Good write. All the best.

Emma.

Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:22:49 AM AEST
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Very touching, I hope all turns out well for you in the end hon.

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