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Tears fall to the floor
Years gone by
Nothing is as it seems anymore

A little girl dreaming of true love, happiness and happy ever after
is now a women who no longer believes in that little girls dreams.
Dreams of the happy ever after and true love are now replaced with reality.

Reality of a world where hate, lies, and death are more prominent then love, truth and life.
Where children are robbed of there innocence..
Where parents are blind, and careless.
Where criminals get away and justice isn't served.

True Happiness is nothing but a dream, to far away to reach in this world.
True love and happy ever after is nothing but that fairy tale that young girl dreamed all those years ago.

As tears fall to the floor
Years gone by
Nothing is as it seems anymore [comments] => 6 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 43 [informant] => mindancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
tears

Contributed by mindancer on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 03:39:20 AM in AEST
Topic: oops




Tears fall to the floor
Years gone by
Nothing is as it seems anymore

A little girl dreaming of true love, happiness and happy ever after
is now a women who no longer believes in that little girls dreams.
Dreams of the happy ever after and true love are now replaced with reality.

Reality of a world where hate, lies, and death are more prominent then love, truth and life.
Where children are robbed of there innocence..
Where parents are blind, and careless.
Where criminals get away and justice isn't served.

True Happiness is nothing but a dream, to far away to reach in this world.
True love and happy ever after is nothing but that fairy tale that young girl dreamed all those years ago.

As tears fall to the floor
Years gone by
Nothing is as it seems anymore




Copyright © mindancer ... [ 2003-12-17 03:39:20]
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Re: tears (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:16:05 AM AEST
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ahhh mindancer......welcome to this world.......nothing is ever as it ever seemed before yesterday.......look forward to more writing.........


Re: tears (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 07:35:31 AM AEST
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Feel better, now that you've joined us among the ranks of the dejected. Everyone else wants to too.


Re: tears (User Rating: 1 )
by infedelity_hurts on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 07:55:00 AM AEST
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this reallly touched me....

beautiful write.. please keep posting...

what do you hate more.. a writers block.. or seeing that 15 people have read your poem and not replied...?


Re: tears (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:07:55 AM AEST
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Oh VERY GOOD WRITE HON, tyou can write to me anytime if you need someone.


Re: tears (User Rating: 1 )
by jme on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 04:23:47 PM AEST
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I like your writing. Such a vivid imagination. P


Re: tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:43:11 AM AEST
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An intelligent and poignant piece of poetry.
I enjoyed it immensely.
Thanks for writing.




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