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EYES THAT LIE
Contributed by
putteragain
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Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:22:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Faraway eyes they stare at me
I wonder exactly what It Is they see
looking through me eyes like steel
my mind plays tricks don't know whats real
when I can see them for what they are
It's me staring back ...how bizarre
Michelle Todd
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putteragain
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2003-12-17 17:22:08]
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Re: EYES THAT LIE
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:24:47 PM AEST
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| Hmmm. maybe you should have labled it Psychotic poetry...just jokin, I loved it it was awesome..REALLY |
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Re: EYES THAT LIE
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by Lia on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 09:35:38 PM AEST
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| You should add more to this..it's good |
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Re: EYES THAT LIE
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 10:16:41 PM AEST
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I agree this is very good and should be added to.
I've had the same thoughts many times and glad to see there are others like me...
Kie |
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Re: EYES THAT LIE
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:39:19 PM AEST
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| Interesting... Let's the mind run with it. I enjoyed it. |
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Re: EYES THAT LIE
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by jme on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 12:06:19 PM AEST
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| I like poetry that gets to the point. Nice. |
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