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rejection
Contributed by
a_t0rtured_s0ul
on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 04:26:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Avoidance, Rejection, My heartahches advance.
Pain, Torture, Deception the game main.
Lies, Distortions, For you to stop is my plea.
Mistrust, Unreliability, My life turns to dust.
Friends, Enemies, Everything's pretend.
Nothing, Everything, Pretend is everything but my suffering.
Suicide, Self-Destruction, Dark, cold, empty, and abandoned inside.
Abandonment, Garbage, You want to be absent.
Ugly, Sinister, How you treat me.
Appreciation, Respect, How you treated me in the beginning of the end.
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a_t0rtured_s0ul
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2003-12-18 04:26:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: rejection
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 01:19:41 AM AEST (User
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I liked this dark and to the point. You show your pain and anger well.
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