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Array ( [sid] => 2967 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Walk Away [time] => 2002-08-29 08:52:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The loudest thing I ever heard
Was when you never said a word
You turned your back and walked away
Assuming that I’d be okay
Fallen down and all alone
You were the one to throw the stone
I have feelings and I hurt
Please don’t treat me just like dirt
I trusted you with all of me
It’s from you that now I flee
Captured in an icy stare
Hurt like this is very rare
I’ll pick up the pieces of my core
Rebuild them in a quiet roar
My life has never given me slack
So walk away and don’t look back
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 32 [informant] => LJ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Walk Away

Contributed by LJ on Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 08:52:36 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



The loudest thing I ever heard
Was when you never said a word
You turned your back and walked away
Assuming that I’d be okay
Fallen down and all alone
You were the one to throw the stone
I have feelings and I hurt
Please don’t treat me just like dirt
I trusted you with all of me
It’s from you that now I flee
Captured in an icy stare
Hurt like this is very rare
I’ll pick up the pieces of my core
Rebuild them in a quiet roar
My life has never given me slack
So walk away and don’t look back




Copyright © LJ ... [ 2002-08-29 08:52:36]
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Re: Walk Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 06:43:07 AM AEST
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Awww LJ this is so sad. I'm hoping this is fiction, but if not then well I hope things look up for you.
Lasca


Re: Walk Away (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 05:03:18 PM AEST
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I only wish it wasn't true


Re: Walk Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 12:37:44 PM AEST
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Dear LJ, This version is very good. I'd have to see them side by side to choose the best.
Love, Friend Bizzy




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