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Array ( [sid] => 29859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Together Eternally [time] => 2003-12-21 04:40:53 [hometext] => This is just a simple poem for you my dear I know that you can't read it coz you're not here any more but I believe that there in the sky you hear me when i talk, you see me when i cry for you still here deep in my heart and I'll always & 4ever love you [bodytext] => Every night, when I close my eyes
I hear you breathing
I see the smile on your face
While you are sleeping
Close to me and dreaming.

Sometimes, I feel your arms
Holding me, your hand
Wiping my tears away softly
And your heart so close to mine beating.

I still hear your lovely voice
Everywhere we used to stay
Whispering those sweet words
That I will never forget.

You brought back the joy to my life
You warm up my heart when it was a cold stone
You gave me hope when I was at the end
You gave me strength when I was weak
Then gave me faith to go on
You took me home when I was lost
Your heart was my home
You had my missing pieces I was searching for
You did everything so right just to gratify me, yes I knew
You shown me the meaning of love and sacrifice, yes you did

I still remember when you told me that
We would be together eternally
I believed you, yes I did
I supposed you'd always be there.

But now, I'm all alone again
Crying out in the rain, what a cruel life!
No , I can't forget that sad dark night
When you went far, so far away
Like so many dear people I've lost along the way
Darling I'm sorry for all the things I never told you
So sorry for every moment I wasn't beside you
For every moment of weakness, hopelessness or distrust

No, I can't forget the tears I cried so many nights
From the bottom of this sad broken heart
Tears of bitterness, fear and despair
'cause I couldn't believe you wouldn't be there any more
I couldn't imagine my life without your smile,
But now I know eventually we'll be together some day
In the sky together eternally And I'll tell you all I want to say

Sweet darling,
I miss the love we shared
I miss the dreams we lived
I miss everything
I miss you so.
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Together Eternally

Contributed by P0rNStAr on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 04:40:53 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Every night, when I close my eyes
I hear you breathing
I see the smile on your face
While you are sleeping
Close to me and dreaming.

Sometimes, I feel your arms
Holding me, your hand
Wiping my tears away softly
And your heart so close to mine beating.

I still hear your lovely voice
Everywhere we used to stay
Whispering those sweet words
That I will never forget.

You brought back the joy to my life
You warm up my heart when it was a cold stone
You gave me hope when I was at the end
You gave me strength when I was weak
Then gave me faith to go on
You took me home when I was lost
Your heart was my home
You had my missing pieces I was searching for
You did everything so right just to gratify me, yes I knew
You shown me the meaning of love and sacrifice, yes you did

I still remember when you told me that
We would be together eternally
I believed you, yes I did
I supposed you'd always be there.

But now, I'm all alone again
Crying out in the rain, what a cruel life!
No , I can't forget that sad dark night
When you went far, so far away
Like so many dear people I've lost along the way
Darling I'm sorry for all the things I never told you
So sorry for every moment I wasn't beside you
For every moment of weakness, hopelessness or distrust

No, I can't forget the tears I cried so many nights
From the bottom of this sad broken heart
Tears of bitterness, fear and despair
'cause I couldn't believe you wouldn't be there any more
I couldn't imagine my life without your smile,
But now I know eventually we'll be together some day
In the sky together eternally And I'll tell you all I want to say

Sweet darling,
I miss the love we shared
I miss the dreams we lived
I miss everything
I miss you so.




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Re: Together Eternally (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 05:17:35 AM AEST
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This is such a beautifull, sweet, sad, painfull write. It will certainly make a person think if ya got a heart. Many will learn from your words, pain, realization and hope.
Sorry for your loss but she knows what's in your heart even now.
peace, joy, luv, hope, huggs,
emy
have a luving holidy


Re: Together Eternally (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 07:06:27 AM AEST
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it's deep




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