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I watched you from a far
I heard you speak so softly
I saw you sparkle under the star

you gave me the best time ever
I wish it could've lasted longer
wish it could've lasted forever
i'm loving you so much stronger

sat to stare at the stars with you
while you breathed upon my neck
with you sitting there so blue
with everything so perfect

I never wanted to leave
but we both knew I had to
and I want you to believe
that I'd do anything to be with you

but I'll be back one day
this is my promise to you
I might not be there to stay
but its a promise I'll see right through [comments] => 3 [counter] => 267 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Pompous [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

My Promise

Contributed by Pompous on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 07:07:29 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I watched you closely
I watched you from a far
I heard you speak so softly
I saw you sparkle under the star

you gave me the best time ever
I wish it could've lasted longer
wish it could've lasted forever
i'm loving you so much stronger

sat to stare at the stars with you
while you breathed upon my neck
with you sitting there so blue
with everything so perfect

I never wanted to leave
but we both knew I had to
and I want you to believe
that I'd do anything to be with you

but I'll be back one day
this is my promise to you
I might not be there to stay
but its a promise I'll see right through

Copyright © Pompous ... [ 2003-12-21 07:07:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by P0rNStAr on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 08:01:37 AM AEST
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aww sweet but sad! ;( hope all ends well best wishes ;o) much love Sway P*

Re: My Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 08:26:51 AM AEST
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Great job!
peace, joy, luv, happy holidays,
emy

Re: My Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:01:57 AM AEST
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Great write! Wow, another one to add to my list of favorites. Thank you for sharing.

Lindsey

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