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crimson stains on stainless steel
Contributed by
infedelity_hurts
on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 12:58:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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extraction
the knife is released
you pulled it out
yet the venom
still pokes and prods my tendons
they are singed
weak, from your blade
that dashes in and out of your mouth.
its a moist pink snake
that poisoned my love for you...
the rasp of your sweet voice
cuts through, close to my heart
its bleeding a crimson river
with everlasting player power in its current
like the power with which you drove this blade
thus creating the puddle of blood you see before you...
with no blood left to flow
theres no room for second chances
with no blood left to flow
theres no room for second chances
but your knife isn't tired
it has grown to love the taste of my skin
with each new flesh wound
it further craves the satisfaction of my tears
addicted to them as if they were cocaine
it's time for rehab
find another soul to torture
another life to take
i'm not ready...
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Re: crimson stains on stainless steel
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 07:03:49 PM AEST
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wow this was beautiful very strong and dark... I loved it all.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: crimson stains on stainless steel
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 03:10:53 PM AEST
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| I agree with Joel this was incredibly beautifuly dark. It was a wonderful write. I liked how the idea was expressed. Pretty cool. |
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