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Foolishness
Contributed by
TheVarsh
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Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:23:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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FOOLISHNESS! Spurning the ones who care With words like I'm fine It's nothing There's nothing wrong When you know that Deep inside you the voices Scream for release But you keep it in For fear of angering those you love Why are you angry What have they done that Is so destructive NOTHING! You sit in silence as their Words of love wash over you What do you gain Other than an ache in your heart And a feeling of "I should have done this" It's so foolish of me FOOLISHNESS! I hope you can forgive me...
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Re: Foolishness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:35:58 AM AEST (User
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I don't think you're an idiot.... this was a fine piece of work..good show of feelings..
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Re: Foolishness
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:36:57 AM AEST (User
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this is sad but i can understand it.. i've felt this way before myself.. very well expressed
great job
Peace joy and hope
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Re: Foolishness
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:35:43 AM AEST (User
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I agree with Jen your not an idiot..........I say ba hum bug on that!! Some situations are hard specially when it comes toloved ones and being painfully honest about your feelings.
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Re: Foolishness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:02:48 PM AEST (User
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you are far from being an idiot....just open up to love and see your troubles vanish in the light that love creates....talk to her...she will understand. blessed be. |
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