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Array ( [sid] => 30158 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take Me Back [time] => 2003-12-25 20:02:16 [hometext] => *written on December 25* [bodytext] => Lost in thoughts.
I know,
I’m better off with you.
But I like being with him.
You’re perfect for me.
He’s just there.
I don’t think you’ll take me back.
If I knew you would,
I would jump at that chance.
I would do anything to get you back.
I’m afraid,
If I stay with him,
I will end up making some more mistakes.
I’m with him,
Because he is here for me.
I know he cares.
He does stupid things, I know.
You,
You’re smart about everything.
You are the smartest man I know.
There is no one,
That I would rather be with,
Than you, my love.
I still love you.
I still cry.
I still need you.
And boy, do I still miss you.
I really miss our times together. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 365 [topic] => 24 [informant] => all_for_loving_you [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Take Me Back

Contributed by all_for_loving_you on Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 08:02:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Lost in thoughts.
I know,
I’m better off with you.
But I like being with him.
You’re perfect for me.
He’s just there.
I don’t think you’ll take me back.
If I knew you would,
I would jump at that chance.
I would do anything to get you back.
I’m afraid,
If I stay with him,
I will end up making some more mistakes.
I’m with him,
Because he is here for me.
I know he cares.
He does stupid things, I know.
You,
You’re smart about everything.
You are the smartest man I know.
There is no one,
That I would rather be with,
Than you, my love.
I still love you.
I still cry.
I still need you.
And boy, do I still miss you.
I really miss our times together.

Copyright Â© all_for_loving_you ... [ 2003-12-25 20:02:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Take Me Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 12:10:17 AM AEST
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Girl I know what you're talking about. I am in the same boy

Re: Take Me Back (User Rating: 1 )
by all_for_loving_you on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 08:31:38 PM AEST
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This blows.

Re: Take Me Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 12:03:39 PM AEST
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Woah... This sounds all too familiar to me... I'd tell you to just let him go but... I know you probably won't... Damn that hit home on the opposite end... I hope it all works out for the best for you... Don't make mistakes with someone elses heart though. Great write btw. I liked it.

Re: Take Me Back (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 10:51:32 PM AEST
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girl that is so true! im feelin that way right now and i DONT know what to do. ..........

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