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[aid] => mick
[title] => That dang string
[time] => 2003-12-28 12:28:44
[hometext] => This is the first time i have tried to write something like this so even negative comments are welcome. Gotta learn somehow
[bodytext] => Ever wear a sweater where you notice a string poking out of it? Staring at that string, does the urge to pull it come over you? Do you hesitate knowing pulling that string may result in nothing? Or it could ultimately lead to that sweaters demise. You go about your day, trying to ignore that destructive force. Eventually the pull becomes too much With held breath, that string you give a tug With a sigh of relief, the string fails to even budge You do your best to tuck it out of sight and out of mind Yet still you find yourself drawn back to it Your eyes drifting down, your hand hovering near Its just a string you say, go ahead pull it, throw it away That string beckons to you, you just can’t resist With a sigh of defeat, you grasp that string firmly You know once its gone, temptation will cease to exist With a firm tug, that string begins to unravel That sting that once was so little, now as started a chain reaction You cannot let it go It must end somewhere Pull and pull you do Now completely focused, with new determination You vow to rid yourself of that string once and for all After what seems like hours, the end is soon in sight With a cry of satisfaction, you hold the other end In the warm glow of your success You fail to realize the new situation that has arised Now instead of a sweater with a small string poking out You find yourself completely without [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 7 [informant] => mercedes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )
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