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Array ( [sid] => 30404 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => autumn [time] => 2003-12-30 03:34:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sitting and waiting feeling the autumn chill,
Watching the deer trail across the next hill.
Wondering what it's like to be free,
Wanting him to love me.
Now I sit and cry in the brush,
Missing his comforting touch.
Arrow nocked and ready to fire,
I can only concentrate on my desires.
As I wonder what's in store,
Tears stream even more.
Doing nothing but staring,
Reminiscing how he once was so caring.
Remembering how he once treated me with dignity,
Now he's distant and fading from me.

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autumn

Contributed by a_t0rtured_s0ul on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 03:34:56 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Sitting and waiting feeling the autumn chill,
Watching the deer trail across the next hill.
Wondering what it's like to be free,
Wanting him to love me.
Now I sit and cry in the brush,
Missing his comforting touch.
Arrow nocked and ready to fire,
I can only concentrate on my desires.
As I wonder what's in store,
Tears stream even more.
Doing nothing but staring,
Reminiscing how he once was so caring.
Remembering how he once treated me with dignity,
Now he's distant and fading from me.

if u liked this poem visit my site and check out more:
poems by soul
http://www.geocities.com/a_t0rtured_s0ul

Copyright © a_t0rtured_s0ul ... [ 2003-12-30 03:34:56]
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Re: autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 03:38:17 AM AEST
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Well done.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 06:52:03 AM AEST
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Very nice indeed.

Re: autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by carebear on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 08:30:48 PM AEST
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hey
wow this poem was really filled with ryhem and its like a story I guess is how I put it very well writen n beauitful.

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