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Array ( [sid] => 30456 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All The While, I Wish For Faces I Can Never Hold Again [time] => 2003-12-31 00:47:01 [hometext] => The saddest lowest part of my life has taught me to write...not as a writer, but as a human being. Love and Happiness to everyone who reads and appreciates. As low as I have been and as happy as I am now. [bodytext] => All the while
Sitting, reading into this

I wish I could see you again
Staring back at me through the mist

Haunting as the ghosts of winter
Cold and in distress

I remember the stars that held your face so lovely
And the windows down always the best

Sorry for all the things that I'd said and done

I've lost the touch, and you're the one

I wish I could tell you
All the things that hold me up so high

Wishing these lost hopes forever
And waking up wishing only to die

Standing on feet so broken
Thinking with a head so full

An explosion of nowhere
And it's your pin to pull

The constant thoughts that hold me
And you, the demon that would render

I wish you could hold me
My arms in your surrender

Everything I can't remember
And all the thoughts I can

Wake up from being pathetic
Become a better man

Consequences that we render
And the voice that you lost me to

I wish you could see me
Hold me back like you used to do

I wish all the hopes and dreams
The months scratched into a wall

It's the consequences you run from
And yet, I am here to catch your fall

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All The While, I Wish For Faces I Can Never Hold Again

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 12:47:01 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



All the while
Sitting, reading into this

I wish I could see you again
Staring back at me through the mist

Haunting as the ghosts of winter
Cold and in distress

I remember the stars that held your face so lovely
And the windows down always the best

Sorry for all the things that I'd said and done

I've lost the touch, and you're the one

I wish I could tell you
All the things that hold me up so high

Wishing these lost hopes forever
And waking up wishing only to die

Standing on feet so broken
Thinking with a head so full

An explosion of nowhere
And it's your pin to pull

The constant thoughts that hold me
And you, the demon that would render

I wish you could hold me
My arms in your surrender

Everything I can't remember
And all the thoughts I can

Wake up from being pathetic
Become a better man

Consequences that we render
And the voice that you lost me to

I wish you could see me
Hold me back like you used to do

I wish all the hopes and dreams
The months scratched into a wall

It's the consequences you run from
And yet, I am here to catch your fall





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Re: All The While, I Wish For Faces I Can Never Hold Again (User Rating: 1 )
by a_t0rtured_s0ul on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 03:48:02 AM AEST
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very nice..i hope you are better


Re: All The While, I Wish For Faces I Can Never Hold Again (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 05:32:08 AM AEST
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I liked this write.

Emma.


Re: All The While, I Wish For Faces I Can Never Hold Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 01:10:27 PM AEST
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I for one think this write was absolutely amazing. It felt as if you put all that you were into writing it... All that you were feeling... I could feel power behind it. Totaly deeply awesome.




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