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Array ( [sid] => 30510 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => - Moonlit Garden - [time] => 2003-12-31 19:35:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I quietly step into the peaceful haven
Alone, with no wretched soul to harm me
My dress of plain white silk brushed the white stone floor
Eyes of deep angelic blue look around this place of beauty
Lovely, white doves circle around the precious moon

Tall, pure white arches hang over me
Emerald green ivy coils through them
Perfect blood red roses grow among the speared fences
White lily’s sway in the cold, welcoming wind
The shimmering moon blankets the flowers in an everlasting hold

I follow the turning path hoping to find an answer
A clear answer to unlock my wandering, lonesome heart
The capturing, silver stars hoard the ravishing night
A haunting, bleak song intervenes my miserable spirit

My lingering spirit breaks from it’s harrowing keep
I think to myself, I’m confined to wander this planet alone
The gleaming moon rises into the blinding unknown
Darkness entraps me, pulling me into a black hell
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- Moonlit Garden -

Contributed by Crimson_Rose on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 07:35:17 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I quietly step into the peaceful haven
Alone, with no wretched soul to harm me
My dress of plain white silk brushed the white stone floor
Eyes of deep angelic blue look around this place of beauty
Lovely, white doves circle around the precious moon

Tall, pure white arches hang over me
Emerald green ivy coils through them
Perfect blood red roses grow among the speared fences
White lily’s sway in the cold, welcoming wind
The shimmering moon blankets the flowers in an everlasting hold

I follow the turning path hoping to find an answer
A clear answer to unlock my wandering, lonesome heart
The capturing, silver stars hoard the ravishing night
A haunting, bleak song intervenes my miserable spirit

My lingering spirit breaks from it’s harrowing keep
I think to myself, I’m confined to wander this planet alone
The gleaming moon rises into the blinding unknown
Darkness entraps me, pulling me into a black hell

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Re: - Moonlit Garden - (User Rating: 1 )
by Blaze on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 08:28:56 PM AEST
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The imagery is eerily beautiful. Nice poem.

Re: - Moonlit Garden - (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 08:47:20 PM AEST
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wooooooo!!!!!!!! it was like I was right there with you great picture yo painted here
michelle

Re: - Moonlit Garden - (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 01:54:37 AM AEST
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I hear ya.
Awesome work of art!
Best New Year ever, peace, joy, luv, hope,
emy

Re: - Moonlit Garden - (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 05:57:37 AM AEST
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This absolutely obliterates any notion of beauty I previously had. I am awe-struck. One of the best i've read in a long time, I love your style so much.

Truly (and still stunned),
-V.S.

Re: - Moonlit Garden - (User Rating: 1 )
by alixia12 on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 06:06:48 AM AEST
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i thought ur poem Moonlit Garden was very heartfelt and beautiful.I know its hard to understand the choices you make and where they would take you.You soon will understand that the things you've done have a reason for being.But your not alone you will find someone and when you do you'll regret ever thinking they weren't there.

Re: - Moonlit Garden - (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 02:37:21 AM AEST
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Very good imagry...you write like a artist paints....i love the style

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