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Array ( [sid] => 30723 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Jotted down words [time] => 2004-01-04 08:13:06 [hometext] => A nice mixture of what was in my head, confusing isnt it [bodytext] => These words that I write are meant to be said
To live is to fight - We'd be better off dead
No one is polite - We are f---ed in the head
No one has the right or the above you could have read

If life is a game - wich of us will lose
Sure we're all same-So can the loser choose
Take one with some fame-He can not refuse
Make him have no name-I bet he argues

The richer you are- the better you'll be
But if your a star- you'll never be free
Drive a nice car- for others to see
I'll look from afar- your no better than me

The poorer I am- the worse come the end
Can't fall for a scam- with no money to spend
Im roming the land- to look for a freind
I guess I've been scammed- theres none in the end

For richer for poorer till death do us part
I'm not the one who asked this to start
To have and to hold through better or worse
I HATE YOU GOD I HAVE NO REMORSE
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Jotted down words

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 08:13:06 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

These words that I write are meant to be said
To live is to fight - We'd be better off dead
No one is polite - We are f---ed in the head
No one has the right or the above you could have read

If life is a game - wich of us will lose
Sure we're all same-So can the loser choose
Take one with some fame-He can not refuse
Make him have no name-I bet he argues

The richer you are- the better you'll be
But if your a star- you'll never be free
Drive a nice car- for others to see
I'll look from afar- your no better than me

The poorer I am- the worse come the end
Can't fall for a scam- with no money to spend
Im roming the land- to look for a freind
I guess I've been scammed- theres none in the end

For richer for poorer till death do us part
I'm not the one who asked this to start
To have and to hold through better or worse
I HATE YOU GOD I HAVE NO REMORSE

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2004-01-04 08:13:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Jotted down words (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 09:00:40 AM AEST
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i like i like so very true you made us all relize the compications that life is

Re: Jotted down words (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 11:29:04 AM AEST
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Very good, i liked this one

Re: Jotted down words (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 09:09:10 PM AEST
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I thought the rhyme scheme in this was rad and overall it was written very well... except for the last line that ruined it I'm sorry to say.

Bobo (Joel)

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