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Array ( [sid] => 30733 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Angelic Suicide [time] => 2004-01-04 11:28:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => We all heard the murmors of her angelic voice, too quickly swift away by those hurtful looks.

Her love pattered upon our hearts like a continuous drizzle but failed to wet even the softest of minds.

Her screams went unheard to the ones close by, ignoring her pain sending her away into an endless cry.

No-one bothered to look deeper than her fading smile, never caring to ask her WHY.
She walked this earth with an air of dignity yet stumbled and fell behind closed doors.

A thousand laughs she used to sound but never once in her heart find ground.

She lay there in the dark alone, never once beyond the steel doors had flown.

They never looked until the day she could no longer stand the shame.

She lay there like a Sleeping Beauty, destined to never awaken. There voices cried out to her death, but never realised the true depth.

Now she's free, for eternity. Free to laugh, to smile, to cry to sing. Never again will they see here wake, hear her talk or watch her walk.

They called it suicide but many of the unheard would cry out murder!! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 39 [informant] => MissTea [notes] => .....checked by mod_6......04-01-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Angelic Suicide

Contributed by MissTea on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 11:28:54 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



We all heard the murmors of her angelic voice, too quickly swift away by those hurtful looks.

Her love pattered upon our hearts like a continuous drizzle but failed to wet even the softest of minds.

Her screams went unheard to the ones close by, ignoring her pain sending her away into an endless cry.

No-one bothered to look deeper than her fading smile, never caring to ask her WHY.
She walked this earth with an air of dignity yet stumbled and fell behind closed doors.

A thousand laughs she used to sound but never once in her heart find ground.

She lay there in the dark alone, never once beyond the steel doors had flown.

They never looked until the day she could no longer stand the shame.

She lay there like a Sleeping Beauty, destined to never awaken. There voices cried out to her death, but never realised the true depth.

Now she's free, for eternity. Free to laugh, to smile, to cry to sing. Never again will they see here wake, hear her talk or watch her walk.

They called it suicide but many of the unheard would cry out murder!!




Copyright © MissTea ... [ 2004-01-04 11:28:54]
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Re: Angelic Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by irshprnss on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 12:55:20 PM AEST
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Very Deep! Very Beautiful yet tragic (and sadly true for many people) Great Write.
Diana




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