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Array ( [sid] => 30851 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you [time] => 2004-01-05 21:54:47 [hometext] => this is from grd 8/9.... very old.... i like what little me wrote, so here it is for your reading enjoyment. [bodytext] => You

LOVE iS A WHORE
AND i’M ALL ALONE
LiFE iS A *****
AND YOU’RE ALONE TOO

LOOK UP AT THE SKY
TELL ME WHAT YOU SEE
iF YOU SEE NOTHiNG BUT DARKNESS
YOU’RE JUST LiKE ME

i SEE YOUR LONELiNESS
i FEEL YOUR HUNGER
THE HUNGER iNSiDE OF YOU
AND THE BURNiNG ANGER

YOU’RE FULL OF POTENTiAL
USELESS iNDEED
YOU NEED NO ONE
YET YOU ARE iN NEED

YOU REACH OUT TO GRAB
SOMETHiNG NOT THERE
AND WHEN YOU FALL BACK
YOU DROWN IN DESPAiR

WHY ARE YOU ALL ALONE?
DiD LiFE FORGET YOU?
DiD LOVE LEAVE YOU BEHiND?

YOU’RE iN OBLiViON
YOU SEEM NOT TO CARE
YET i KNOW THAT iNSiDE
YOU’RE GASPiNG FOR AiR

iT’S HARD TO FORGET YOU
CAN’T FORGET MY OWN FACE
iNSCRiBED WiTH A PAiN
i COULD NEVER ERASE

iF LiFE FORGOT ME
AND iF LOVE DOESN’T CARE
THEN TEACH ME TO CRY
AND TEACH ME A PRAYER [comments] => 3 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 43 [informant] => me [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

you

Contributed by me on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 09:54:47 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

You

LOVE iS A WHORE
AND i’M ALL ALONE
LiFE iS A *****
AND YOU’RE ALONE TOO

LOOK UP AT THE SKY
TELL ME WHAT YOU SEE
iF YOU SEE NOTHiNG BUT DARKNESS
YOU’RE JUST LiKE ME

i SEE YOUR LONELiNESS
i FEEL YOUR HUNGER
THE HUNGER iNSiDE OF YOU
AND THE BURNiNG ANGER

YOU’RE FULL OF POTENTiAL
USELESS iNDEED
YOU NEED NO ONE
YET YOU ARE iN NEED

YOU REACH OUT TO GRAB
SOMETHiNG NOT THERE
AND WHEN YOU FALL BACK
YOU DROWN IN DESPAiR

WHY ARE YOU ALL ALONE?
DiD LiFE FORGET YOU?
DiD LOVE LEAVE YOU BEHiND?

YOU’RE iN OBLiViON
YOU SEEM NOT TO CARE
YET i KNOW THAT iNSiDE
YOU’RE GASPiNG FOR AiR

iT’S HARD TO FORGET YOU
CAN’T FORGET MY OWN FACE
iNSCRiBED WiTH A PAiN
i COULD NEVER ERASE

iF LiFE FORGOT ME
AND iF LOVE DOESN’T CARE
THEN TEACH ME TO CRY
AND TEACH ME A PRAYER

Copyright Â© me ... [ 2004-01-05 21:54:47]
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Re: you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 10:01:07 PM AEST
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good work!
Shows wisdom for such a young age.
Very good.
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: you (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:13:46 AM AEST
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wow I dunno how old you were when you wrote that, but it reads well, rhymes well, and shows an aparent better realization of the world than most thirty year olds!

Alec Fernandez

Re: you (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 12:07:29 PM AEST
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grade 7 or 8...12 or 13?? whoa... this rocks.. awesome

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