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Array ( [sid] => 30857 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forgive Me [time] => 2004-01-05 23:22:34 [hometext] => This is about a guyfrind of mine. [bodytext] => a simple question
a simple word answered
broke your heart
and you turned away;
breaking my heart

three years of friendship;
shattered
with only one word
"no"
which I crushed two hearts by saying

you were my big brother
always there;
to make me smile
keeping me safe
from all evil

my guardian angel
protecting me
watching me
never resting
until I was safe

where did you go
I crave your protection
I miss you
Im sorry
please forgive me [comments] => 5 [counter] => 531 [topic] => 50 [informant] => monkey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
Forgive Me

Contributed by monkey on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 11:22:34 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



a simple question
a simple word answered
broke your heart
and you turned away;
breaking my heart

three years of friendship;
shattered
with only one word
"no"
which I crushed two hearts by saying

you were my big brother
always there;
to make me smile
keeping me safe
from all evil

my guardian angel
protecting me
watching me
never resting
until I was safe

where did you go
I crave your protection
I miss you
Im sorry
please forgive me




Copyright © monkey ... [ 2004-01-05 23:22:34]
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Re: Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 11:48:45 PM AEST
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So sweet, how could anyone resist.
peace, joy, luv,
emy


Re: Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 12:24:14 AM AEST
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Nice one. Shows truth in words.. Nice writting..

Majestic


Re: Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:54:44 AM AEST
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Great write! I hope you and your friend are reunited again

Chanti *


Re: Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:39:49 AM AEST
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Very nice writing... We all make mistakes and often feel sorry for them... It's obvious that you treasure this person and I believe that he'll find strenghts to forgive you and be again your "big brother"! Cheers,Vanya


Re: Forgive Me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 04:15:59 PM AEST
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Sounds so familiar to me. Been there hun. Keep writing.




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