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Array ( [sid] => 30901 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death Wish [time] => 2004-01-06 13:51:16 [hometext] => This poem was written while in a state of what can I say, hmmm depression? but I'm positive that there are a lot of ppl that had these thoughts in some phase of their lives manly teenagers [bodytext] =>


I’m burning, spurting red liquid from my aching veins,
My head spins and I feel good,
I’m tired of this life dictated for me,
I just want to be me, just my usual self,
Not the person you want me to be.

Am I selfish? Or am I a rebel?
Can’t I do what I want?
I’m tired of this life, living only trough illusions my mind makes…
…. my dreams, my fantasies, my misery and doom,
Shots from my perfect life, the one I’ll never see

Condemning us to a loveless life is what you’re doing,
Always thinking for yourselves not bothering to look around you,
At the persons that surround you until they’re no more,
Is that what you want?

Will you remember me after I’m no longer here?
Or will you just blame me for my foolishness?
I’m bleeding inside and smiling outside,
I’m cheering for you while I’m eating my insides for the cruelty of life,
The grave’s calling me, it heard my cry and I’m silently replying
Will I be here after this night? Or will I be in sweet oblivion?
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Necromant [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Death Wish

Contributed by Necromant on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:51:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide






I’m burning, spurting red liquid from my aching veins,
My head spins and I feel good,
I’m tired of this life dictated for me,
I just want to be me, just my usual self,
Not the person you want me to be.

Am I selfish? Or am I a rebel?
Can’t I do what I want?
I’m tired of this life, living only trough illusions my mind makes…
…. my dreams, my fantasies, my misery and doom,
Shots from my perfect life, the one I’ll never see

Condemning us to a loveless life is what you’re doing,
Always thinking for yourselves not bothering to look around you,
At the persons that surround you until they’re no more,
Is that what you want?

Will you remember me after I’m no longer here?
Or will you just blame me for my foolishness?
I’m bleeding inside and smiling outside,
I’m cheering for you while I’m eating my insides for the cruelty of life,
The grave’s calling me, it heard my cry and I’m silently replying
Will I be here after this night? Or will I be in sweet oblivion?




Copyright © Necromant ... [ 2004-01-06 13:51:16]
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Re: Death Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:01:15 PM AEST
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well... your right, many people have these same thoughts.... i am one of them. this is a great poem, about very true emotions. i hope the best for you, and hopefully you will surpass this with your veins intact. ~Apryl


Re: Death Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by lonesomerose on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:59:12 PM AEST
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I hope things work out for you be yourself


Re: Death Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by jme on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 03:29:21 PM AEST
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The grave’s calling me, it heard my cry and I’m silently replying
Will I be here after this night? Or will I be in sweet oblivion?

Great job. You have a way with words.


Re: Death Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Empty_Soul on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:21:21 PM AEST
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I love all your poems, they all seem to connect to me so well, perhaps not the happy ones as you know. lol. another great write really love the first stanza. well done anne.
John :)


Re: Death Wish (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:51:09 PM AEST
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You're not alone having these feelings.
"Will I be here after this night? Or will I be in sweet Oblivion?" who knows. don't give up.

Vanny


Re: Death Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:57:33 AM AEST
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deep emotion... GOOD!
amazing use to words,




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