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Array ( [sid] => 30949 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => no more shadows to hide in [time] => 2004-01-07 01:05:42 [hometext] => she isnt that short i just make fun of her for it [bodytext] => I have something to say
I don't quit know how
The words won't come
They linger in the back

As I struggle to bring them forth
you slowly drift away from me
this felling I cant wash away or hide
this emotion that proves my humanity
I cant stand it

It eats at me
Day by day I fell smaller
As the sort one grows taller
(you)

I lie and lie and say its not you
But I suppose I lie to my self
This sucks I hate it
But not you

Your what I cant hate
And your always there
I think... I think
I love you

You probably wont see this
Or care that it exist
But I am hear and
And can see you tear
The pain he gave you
The joy I could bring
If you gave me a chance
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 33 [informant] => driping_blood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

no more shadows to hide in

Contributed by driping_blood on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:05:42 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I have something to say
I don't quit know how
The words won't come
They linger in the back

As I struggle to bring them forth
you slowly drift away from me
this felling I cant wash away or hide
this emotion that proves my humanity
I cant stand it

It eats at me
Day by day I fell smaller
As the sort one grows taller
(you)

I lie and lie and say its not you
But I suppose I lie to my self
This sucks I hate it
But not you

Your what I cant hate
And your always there
I think... I think
I love you

You probably wont see this
Or care that it exist
But I am hear and
And can see you tear
The pain he gave you
The joy I could bring
If you gave me a chance

Copyright © driping_blood ... [ 2004-01-07 01:05:42]
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Re: no more shadows to hide in (User Rating: 1 )
by scott_milton on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 08:18:58 AM AEST
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nice work, you bring alot of emotion and i like the structure.

...just one thing, work on your spelling more.

Re: no more shadows to hide in (User Rating: 1 )
by CoLD on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 09:46:53 PM AEST
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Awesome poem

Re: no more shadows to hide in (User Rating: 1 )
by Angelic_Demon on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:25:21 AM AEST
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Hey, this is good, I've gone through some of your poetry so far... you're a good writer.

Mars

Re: no more shadows to hide in (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:29:00 AM AEST
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very sweet:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: no more shadows to hide in (User Rating: 1 )
by Barky on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 10:12:06 PM AEST
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well written, i can relate... i like the line where you mention the emotion that proves your humanity, its all so true.

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