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Array ( [sid] => 30971 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Breaking in the Saddle [time] => 2004-01-07 10:10:57 [hometext] => *Whistles a little louder now and begins to lightly smile* [bodytext] => Your sittin' in my lap
screaming what you want.
Feeling like your own santa.
My hand pulling your head
back attached to your hair.
My teeth are in your throat
guttural sounds emit from you
as you start to wash over me.
Rockin' back and forth on me
trying to break in your saddle.
'Til the early dawn we were
on your front lawn we were.
Filling you like never before.
Tasting your sweet blood
running over me lovin' it.
Your nails sink in as do teeth
making me scream in sweet bliss.
Something that I'd forever miss.
Flood waters come as we
come and become one.
Deeper and deeper I push comming
and being in you everywhere.
Lovin' it and diggin' it.
'Til finally we collapse with
hands around each others throat.

The book of the faulty phoenix [comments] => 11 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Breaking in the Saddle

Contributed by Cobalt on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:10:57 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Your sittin' in my lap
screaming what you want.
Feeling like your own santa.
My hand pulling your head
back attached to your hair.
My teeth are in your throat
guttural sounds emit from you
as you start to wash over me.
Rockin' back and forth on me
trying to break in your saddle.
'Til the early dawn we were
on your front lawn we were.
Filling you like never before.
Tasting your sweet blood
running over me lovin' it.
Your nails sink in as do teeth
making me scream in sweet bliss.
Something that I'd forever miss.
Flood waters come as we
come and become one.
Deeper and deeper I push comming
and being in you everywhere.
Lovin' it and diggin' it.
'Til finally we collapse with
hands around each others throat.

The book of the faulty phoenix

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2004-01-07 10:10:57]
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Re: Breaking in the Saddle (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:54:15 AM AEST
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holy s***, this is one scary poem, Jesus, good write, and scary

Re: Breaking in the Saddle (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 11:57:10 AM AEST
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Scary? Defiently not the word i would use but than im sure i dont have to tell you, Jeff, what i think of this one.

Re: Breaking in the Saddle (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:44:36 PM AEST
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A bit freaky ! But well done on the poem! Christina

Re: Breaking in the Saddle (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:47:42 PM AEST
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Ah another one...
The last couple of poems of yours have been sizzlin. I instantly turn into Scarlett O'Hara, begin fanning myself and whispering-"Oh my, oh my indeed"
The room feels a little warm..
I can't wait for the next one!
Kie

Re: Breaking in the Saddle (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 02:36:27 PM AEST
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wow another sizzlin one this is a great write.. very exotic and erotic.. awesome job

peace
JENNA

Re: Breaking in the Saddle (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 03:08:30 PM AEST
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yikes.... reads like the sensual dreams of a vampire or something.... wow. so much darkness.

Re: Breaking in the Saddle (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 04:34:42 PM AEST
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The 2nd line man loved that. You had me craving for the next one and u sure as hell did not disapoint buddy. Can't wait til the next one!

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Breaking in the Saddle (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 04:51:51 PM AEST
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:>)
Jenni

Re: Breaking in the Saddle (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:14:25 AM AEST
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smiles...venkat

Re: Breaking in the Saddle (User Rating: 1 )
by jme on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 08:55:23 AM AEST
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Great word expression. Wonderful job.

Re: Breaking in the Saddle (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 10:13:23 PM AEST
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Wow... you went all out on this one.. and the scary thing is, I have no doubt that you have plenty more in store! LOL I'm feeling a little warm over here... damn... I don't even know what else to say. I can't think at the moment. Damn, that was hot... damn!!!

~ Moonlit

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