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Array ( [sid] => 30978 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Universal Storm [time] => 2004-01-07 11:32:05 [hometext] => I wrote this poem after a friend told me how much I was loved, but for some reason I couldn't stand her kind words. [bodytext] => Words can say so much to my heart,
the unbearability of those kind words can almost tear me apart!

Too much for me, please stop!
Just let me lie down to sleep and be forgot.

I deserve no kind words to fall upon my ears,
I've done so much wrong for many a years.
Please don't speak those words to me,
you won't get a smile or even a glee!

So don't waste your time with simple lines,
either way I'll turn out just fine [comments] => 2 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 27 [informant] => MissTea [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

My Universal Storm

Contributed by MissTea on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 11:32:05 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Words can say so much to my heart,
the unbearability of those kind words can almost tear me apart!

Too much for me, please stop!
Just let me lie down to sleep and be forgot.

I deserve no kind words to fall upon my ears,
I've done so much wrong for many a years.
Please don't speak those words to me,
you won't get a smile or even a glee!

So don't waste your time with simple lines,
either way I'll turn out just fine

Copyright © MissTea ... [ 2004-01-07 11:32:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Universal Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 11:53:21 AM AEST
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good write, you can see clearly the emotions, and possibly the confusion. Confusion moulds life into something else other than expectations, if no-one was confused then there would be no point in living, your poem shows the confusion, of y you couldnt accept the kind words, but one day you'll find clarity and you'l be able to understand

Re: My Universal Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 02:47:53 PM AEST
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sometimes we can't see what others see in us and it is hard to accept...but know if someone saw that in you most likely there is beauty which does shine from within...and one day you may see it also

Shari

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