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Baby born to death. No voice, no Choice!
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 01:04:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Good she thinks, “No one is around” As she peaks through the door, Locking it behind her, as her body hits the ground, Silent screams and silent tears, as her baby is born on the cold bathroom floor.
A mother no one knows about, A baby the world did not expect, Mother cleaning the floor, throwing the evidence out, Not knowing about her neglect, her mind a wreck, the baby lies there, for him she has no respect.
She runs out that room, The child lies there not knowing why, Her life will be filled with fear, her thoughts of gloom, She starts to think, Will the baby cry, could he possibly die?
She stops in her steps, having second thoughts, Should she go back and rescue this child from death? Could she risk even being caught? Still she stands their, crying and out of breath.
She turns to head back, thinking what she can do, Her head filled with confusion and doubt, As she gets closer, she sees people gathered around, cops within view, What happened she thinks, do they know? Did they get the child out?
They walk out; she strains to hear just on little cry, Hoping her son is still alive, Hoping because of her, he did not die, Knowing deep inside, he never had a chance to survive.
She see’s them exit, baby not alive, She drops to her knees, and starts to cry, Hoping they don’t know it was she, a secret kept inside,
Another child, who started without a chance, Another mother second guessing if she could have done more, Another child, another victim of circumstance, Born in the place he would rest, on that cold bathroom floor.
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Re: Baby born to death. No voice, no Choice!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Trisha on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 01:15:59 AM AEST (User
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Hey there. I dont like people like this it's sad |
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Re: Baby born to death. No voice, no Choice!
(User Rating: 1 ) by bluoreo on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 01:22:48 AM AEST (User
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I think it is really awesome that you wrote a poem about this subject. I believe it was well written and it will make some people change their mind about some things. |
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Re: Baby born to death. No voice, no Choice!
(User Rating: 1 ) by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 01:30:19 AM AEST (User
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Thank you both for your comments. I just started to think about it while listing to a song. And started to put the thoughts into words. Yes it is sad, and in the world we live in, there are people out there like this. I appreciate your comments and thank you for your support.
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Re: Baby born to death. No voice, no Choice!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 09:04:05 AM AEST (User
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Oh my god! This poem is really devastating! The description was very good and the wording makes you want to cry...WoW so sad and so true! |
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Re: Baby born to death. No voice, no Choice!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 09:25:39 AM AEST (User
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very well written brings you to the confusion and pain of a child bearing a child...sad but unfortunately a reality
Shari |
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Re: Baby born to death. No voice, no Choice!
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 01:48:49 PM AEST (User
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A very touching write done well! So many times this happens Its sad! I pray for those babies! Christina |
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Re: Baby born to death. No voice, no Choice!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:35:53 PM AEST (User
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This was a good write and you did it well. Bravo! |
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