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Array ( [sid] => 31151 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Repose [time] => 2004-01-09 10:14:02 [hometext] => I don't wanna talk about it, just read. [bodytext] => You destroyed my soul
with your need to control
you took my softly scarred heart,
and slowly ripped it apart
You couldn't see
everything you did to hurt me
I hid my pain
for I was so ashamed
of what I let you do
I should've waited for a love more true
I gave my best love
but for you it wasn't enough
You took my shining blue eyes
faded them, to a gray winter sky
And now my life is so cold
as I wish to slip into a deep repose [comments] => 5 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jacquelynne [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

My Repose

Contributed by jacquelynne on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:14:02 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You destroyed my soul
with your need to control
you took my softly scarred heart,
and slowly ripped it apart
You couldn't see
everything you did to hurt me
I hid my pain
for I was so ashamed
of what I let you do
I should've waited for a love more true
I gave my best love
but for you it wasn't enough
You took my shining blue eyes
faded them, to a gray winter sky
And now my life is so cold
as I wish to slip into a deep repose

Copyright © jacquelynne ... [ 2004-01-09 10:14:02]
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Re: My Repose (User Rating: 1 )
by dumfries on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:41:09 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this. It reminds me of many a young maiden. That is why it is called the maidenhead. It is a gate to bar until the real love comes. Unfortunately it seldom happens that way.

Re: My Repose (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:46:55 AM AEST
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Oh my! Your writing is really good! But how sad! Grrr who was that Ba****d. Hope you find your true love soon and forget

Anne :)

Re: My Repose (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:51:18 AM AEST
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Jump up high and reach the sky cause that is where true love hides...the good lord....sandy...need to talk...write me....i have been there and done that......boy do I know.

Re: My Repose (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 11:24:48 AM AEST
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A lovely yet truely sad poem, I could almost feel the pain in it......'You took my shining blue eyes/ faded them, to a gray winter sky' poor soul, how can one do that to a girl!

Re: My Repose (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:39:57 PM AEST
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Aha, your little poem on our seperation. If we hadn't of made things up on Sunday I would be typing a really nasty comment right now. I really hope that you don't actually bear those emotions. So for you folks that want to know what bastard did this, it was me. Send me hatemail, f*ckers.

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